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ah man, i'm distracted by that bit of his boot that's cut off by the edge.

I always really like the use of forshortening in your work, it's something i have yet to really incorporate into my own sketches really successfully.

I'm noticing something that might be easy to fix, and that is the place on her his nearest shoulder where the scarf looks like it's cutting in or weighing the shoulder down or something.

i had a friend with a tshirt with screen printed bandaids over the nipples. Bandaid boobs were like her trademark for a month three years ago. I'd forgotten about it until now.

[edit] oh....no? it's just an illusion because the line just before the edge of the scarf where it wraps around is darker than the edge itself. in that case it's even easier to fix than i thought.

I don't think he looks like a girl at all...

I love how this is all... dynamic. It makes my art feel so boring. And the little hands on the ends of the scarf are cool! The thing that gets me are the little metal things (I guess?) on his knuckles. On the hand that's closest, they look like they're popping off the glove on the ends since there's nothing to indicate the lower half of the metal piece is still attached to the glove. Maybe they make gloves with metal dealies that way. I don't know! I've never actually seen anyone wearing any.

I love his facial expression.