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alinefvang

PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:20 pm


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fanfiction by: awine.vangy [ or Aline x] .. ]
started: 20080624
ended: - blank -

WARNINGS
___ this is a jaefany fanfic
___ this is rated PG-13

watch trailer [ youtube ] [ photobucket ] [ tinypic ]
main cast supporting cast

Table of Contents
[ 00 ]

OST
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[ or you can click `em while their posted in their chapters ;] .. ]


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Chapter 00

"Bohla... I don't know if I want to do it though," Tiffany said.

"Just do it--it'll make you feel a lot better," Changmin told her.

Tiffany sighed to herself. "... bohlayo," she said once again.

Changmin sighed. "Omo," he muttered. "Just do it, or I'll tell him to call you instead..."

"Andwae!... uh... cheogi, anio--hajima. (No!... uh... I mean, no--don't do it.) He's probably... probably... busy... or something," Tiffany said, trying to convince him not to.

"No, he's on the IM..."

"... he is?" Tiffany asked.

"Mhm."


In the background, Tiffany could hear typing.

"Yah, what're you doing?" Tiffany asked. She listened carefully--picturing Changmin pressing the 'Enter' button--then a pop-up from the IM box.


It was silent for a while. Tiffany waited for Changmin to say something.

"Yah," Tiffany said into her cell. Then it went quiet. "... yah... yeobseyo?" There was no answer. Tiffany sighed. She leaned her head onto her left hand, then blew at her bangs. "... yeobseyo? yeobseyo?... anyone there?!" she asked. There still was no answer.



The silence drowned the atmosphere.



"Aish!," Tiffany heard Changmin curse. She waited for him to speak again. "Yah, na ganda (I gotta go)! Annyong!"

"Boh? Waegeu--" before Tiffany could finish, Changmin hung up. She gasped. Then looked at her phone. It read, "Call Ended; 00:31:58." She let out a sigh.

She went through her Address Book, finding Changmin's number. Before she could enter his number--the MIDI tune of Suju's "Miracle" went off ringing.

"Huh?" she looked at the screen--reading 'unknown.' She decided to pick up. "Yeobseyo?" Tiffany answered.

"Yeobseyo? Tiffany?... uh, Changmin said to call you..."



Tiffany gasped. "Omo!" She bit her lip.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:05 pm


Heehee,
can't wait to see what happens next.
Your fanfic is well written and very interesting.
It has very much potential
and I'm looking forward to the character developments.
But there are few things I'm 'eh' about...

I'm not really fluent with the Korean language and I'm sure other people might not be as well.
Translations to side of the word or maybe a footnote would help
out a great deal.
You did it on some, but a side note on every korean word at least once would help a lot.
But other than that,
I really enjoyed reading your fanfic.

4laugh

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Valsher

PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:37 am


Your fanfic is well-written but your romanization is off. I think you mean Muh? which means what.
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