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 Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 11:57 am
dont cry
dont look so forelorn
there is always sunshine after the storm
dont get mad dont swear
when you look at my children youll see me there
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:29 am
I think it might be better if it was like this.
Don't cry, don't look so forelorn
There is always sunshine after the storm
Don't get mad, don't swear
When you look at my children,
You'll see me there.
Note that I didn't change any of the wording, personally, I think it's perfect! This spacing I just thought made it flow better.
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