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redmind200

PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:40 pm


The world
slowly closes his eyes

Red hair,
like blood
covers my face

my heart regrets
it's own existence

and as the light fades
from my eyes

I no longer
remember my reason
of being here


*sorry, feeling really depressed at this moment*
PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:54 pm


Bitter sweet and simple choice of words for such tale, Red. You did a great job of expression yourself in so few words. I hope you feel better soon!

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