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 Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:10 am
 I drew the clothes, parasol and the accessories not the body or the face. A Dani original. IMPUT PLOX
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:17 pm
ok, honest opinions?
image one:
I like the clothes, they work, they fit well with the style and they match up to the body and posture, good job. the only criticism I have is that unless it's a really cool parasol it looks broken. the cane leans right while the parasol sort of leans right. Sorry, I'm just one of those people who notice things like that. Its still cool and it looks good, but, like I said, it looks either broken or like it wasn't put toghether properly.
image two:
I like. the postures are all perfect, the clothing has decent creases, as does the hair and the bags. the shading could do with a small ammount of work but we can easily say there are 20 lights aimed at him.
The only things I have against it are Zui's eye (her left, our right) it just looks off, like she has a wandering eye. and Adeliede's neck looks too wide. inconsistent with the character.
Overall I like em both.
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:31 am
I thought the parasol was off too but my friend said I was imagining it!!
and I didn't draw the body or anything I just did the clothes and accessories.
Lol Adeliede is a guy~
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:07 pm
Ooh Ooh!! Draw me!! domokun
Ahem!
Now for my criticism. Seeing as how it is very anime-esque... won't say anything about the crooked parasol. It's all so cute I just want to shout KAWAI!!! However, both of the twins look like girls, would would make Adeliede my kind of man... ignore the paradox. mad xd
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Magical Mistress Sarai Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:09 pm
Do you know how long I've been trying to draw you?? sweatdrop
I've decided the parasol looks the way it does is because its been used as a bludgeoning tool way too much~ xd
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