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Hey Umm I'm going to be typing a fan-fic just for the heck of it or maybe I'm just bored. Who ever is reading this fanfic leave some comments, suggestions, or whatever to improve the story or whatever. You will be experiencing some bad grammar and stuff cause I'm not good at that. I like to write stories that have to do with Sonic so yeah! I will be using pictures to fit some actions happening in the story. So here we go!

Try breaking up your text into paragraphs a little more. It'll make it easier to follow...
(I used to write fan-fiction, btw)

Sonic arrived at Metropolis. There are a bunch of robots everywhere. Small ones, big ones, and Gigantic ones. "Man! Why didn't I know about this was going to happen?!" Sonic stomped on the ground. Tails arrived and answered Sonic's question, "Eggman set this as a surprise attack! He made sure that you don't even know about this at all, making sure you won't notice!" "Yeah and the plan worked!" A black hedgehog came walking towards Sonic.

"Shadow!" Sonic said in surprise, "Fancy meeting you here!"

The black hedgehog nodded, "This is all your fault!"

Sonic stepped back, "Hey! Why are you blaming me for this?!"

Shadow turned away, "If only you hadn't been relaxing, none of this would of happened! Now every citizen of Metropolis have became slaves!"

Sonic became nervous, "Well I have to rest once in a while! If not I'll be all stressed and stuff that I will be having heartattacks and stuff!"

Shadow didn't care, he walked towards Tails, "Well smart one, you shouldn't have chose Sonic as your companion. All he cares is just relax and let everyone suffer. Some hero........." Shadow walked away.

Sonic yelled out to Shadow, "I don't see you saving anybody!"

Shadow smirked, "Well, I got my own business to take care of and you got yours which is saving these citizens!"

Sonic looked at Tails, "*sigh* If only Shadow............."

"If only Shadow what?" Tails tilted his head in confusion.

"Oh nevermind!" Sonic jumped and ran inside the city.

Eggman, at the other side of the city, watches Sonic on his computer, "Well Sonic! You have fallen into my trap! Muahahahahahahahahahahahaha!" He pressed a red button. Suddenly, Sonic fell in a hole. "Sonic!" Tails yelled. He tried to save Sonic but the hole closed by itself, leaving Sonic and Tails separated.

Sonic kept falling into the tube but he seems like he is having fun. "Well that Egghead must of changed this place as an amusement park!" Sonic fell out of the tube which is the end of it. Sonic rubbed his bottom since he had a rough landing. He looked around and noticed that he is trapped in a cage!

Sonic tried to break free by Spin Dashing, kicking, well any other attacks he can do to break free but nothing happened.

"Muahahahahahahahaha!" Eggman walked in the room, "Well Sonic, it has been a surprise seeing you have fallen into my trap!"

Sonic yelled at Eggman, "Let me out of this cage!"

Eggman nodded his head, "No I won't! I need you here to stay away! I need to finish conquering Mobius! Muahahahahahahaha!" Eggman left the room.

Sonic sat on the floor trying to think of how he can get out of the cage...........................