Hello, My Name is David Brooks and I am I guess a AVERAGE writer, I make mistakes... I have my faults so you have ANY tips I would love to hear them! {Yes this story is furry... I just don't like writing human stuff stare }
This story is about a young wolf named Hylen J Morzoni, he is a wolf that was born from a "Tame" mother demon named Juno and a Blue wolf father named Paul. Hylen was sadly raised alone pretty much. He lost his father at the age of 5 and his mother dissapered shortly after his birth. She left him worryied her son would not accept his demon blood that ran in his veins. Paul understood Juno as she returned to her village.
Hylen as he was raised by his father ALREADY learning fighting tattics, by the time he hit 5 he could already weild a fullgrown mans long sword.
Hylens father was then killed by another demon, but this demon was not tame instead he was untame that came from the pits of hell itself, from the 7th level sent from a helen god by the name of "Quitor" who seeks out to destroy all life either that grab it by the balls and have absolute control.
Hylen was alone after his fathers death and narrowly escaped the demon himself. Beaten, alone and stranded Hylen used ALL the skills his father had thought him and used them to survive in the forest. Hylen survives for many a year, he lasts until he turned 12 but was then attacked by a large aracnide whos nest he accidently stumbled apon. Hylen fought the creature with many wounds afterwards, his stomach looking gashed open, bite marks on his neck and spider blood all over his body. Hylen was venomed, weakening with each second.
until he had a stroke of luck, Apperantly a HUGE white dragoness {not fatwise, but height and muscle wise}
saw him collapse on the forest ground near her area and nursed him back to health, Her name was Kixie Floresnt, she was like his mother as he lived with her till he turned 15, they fell in love after the large amount of time together. he became her husband. they then left the house and spent 2 more years out on the open forest. {just decided to give Hylens Bio...}
The point to this stroy is Hylen is burdened by much more then he thinks. Due to the fact he was tame and wolven he had naturaly much work to do. Hylen sets out with his wife Kixie for the truth of his birth, the death of his father and also to set his life back on the road. But many more things that Hylen NEVER expected would happen... such as meeting the 3 goddess' themselves, fighting agenst the demons large hords and even getting lucky with one of the goddess' daughters. he lives to fight for his life and also to find out his truths, why was he born and how? what makes him special? He much later after fighting that he was part of a big plan... and now it was his choice either to choose good or evil... the path he chose would set the planet... if he chose to be with the demon... he would take over the planet and rage havor over many lands... chose good he would save lives. destroy the evils and make way for the holy light of good.
But the question is... what path would he choose?
I bet I explained this absolutly horrably... I am NOT good at ******** introductions but do you think this could make a good stroy if I fixed it up?
And PLEASE don't pull this "fur f**" s**t, I just want oppinions not ******** insults. or "Oh he is making a furry story, well it sucks because its not human" I had to much of that with previous storys.
This story is about a young wolf named Hylen J Morzoni, he is a wolf that was born from a "Tame" mother demon named Juno and a Blue wolf father named Paul. Hylen was sadly raised alone pretty much. He lost his father at the age of 5 and his mother dissapered shortly after his birth. She left him worryied her son would not accept his demon blood that ran in his veins. Paul understood Juno as she returned to her village.
Hylen as he was raised by his father ALREADY learning fighting tattics, by the time he hit 5 he could already weild a fullgrown mans long sword.
Hylens father was then killed by another demon, but this demon was not tame instead he was untame that came from the pits of hell itself, from the 7th level sent from a helen god by the name of "Quitor" who seeks out to destroy all life either that grab it by the balls and have absolute control.
Hylen was alone after his fathers death and narrowly escaped the demon himself. Beaten, alone and stranded Hylen used ALL the skills his father had thought him and used them to survive in the forest. Hylen survives for many a year, he lasts until he turned 12 but was then attacked by a large aracnide whos nest he accidently stumbled apon. Hylen fought the creature with many wounds afterwards, his stomach looking gashed open, bite marks on his neck and spider blood all over his body. Hylen was venomed, weakening with each second.
until he had a stroke of luck, Apperantly a HUGE white dragoness {not fatwise, but height and muscle wise}
saw him collapse on the forest ground near her area and nursed him back to health, Her name was Kixie Floresnt, she was like his mother as he lived with her till he turned 15, they fell in love after the large amount of time together. he became her husband. they then left the house and spent 2 more years out on the open forest. {just decided to give Hylens Bio...}
The point to this stroy is Hylen is burdened by much more then he thinks. Due to the fact he was tame and wolven he had naturaly much work to do. Hylen sets out with his wife Kixie for the truth of his birth, the death of his father and also to set his life back on the road. But many more things that Hylen NEVER expected would happen... such as meeting the 3 goddess' themselves, fighting agenst the demons large hords and even getting lucky with one of the goddess' daughters. he lives to fight for his life and also to find out his truths, why was he born and how? what makes him special? He much later after fighting that he was part of a big plan... and now it was his choice either to choose good or evil... the path he chose would set the planet... if he chose to be with the demon... he would take over the planet and rage havor over many lands... chose good he would save lives. destroy the evils and make way for the holy light of good.
But the question is... what path would he choose?
I bet I explained this absolutly horrably... I am NOT good at ******** introductions but do you think this could make a good stroy if I fixed it up?
And PLEASE don't pull this "fur f**" s**t, I just want oppinions not ******** insults. or "Oh he is making a furry story, well it sucks because its not human" I had to much of that with previous storys.
