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redmind200

PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:27 pm


I gently take my place
beside your shadow

the sun colors
your tears golden

the wind blows
the words unspoken
into our heart

time was cast aside
in that moment
were you and me
no longer existed

At the end
I turned around
and walked away

In the mind
of the fallen

goodbye is the saddest word
PostPosted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:47 am


It's a wonderfully sad poem, Red. I especially loved the imagery with the tears, I could picture it in my mind perfectly.

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