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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 3:51 pm
I can't believe I forgot this. ;] Post any writing that you've finished [or not finished. ] This can be a thread for questions on writing and for getting constructive criticism on your work.
edit: when posting, be sure to ask for critique, otherwise we won't know if you want any. c;
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:06 pm
Panda will post some of her work when she's on more later. Hopefully tonight. c:
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:48 pm
Hammi is still building his story. @.@ It takes a while. I won't be able to post it though, or else it would take up A LOT of space. I can email it to people chapter by chapter though.
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 8:00 am
I see. xD I'm more of a short story person myself.
Time for that small bit of my day called school. ;]
UP UP AND AWAY! o:
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:14 am
Nah. I tried to do a short story, and it ended up being about twelve pages long...@.@
So I just stick with what I do best.
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:47 pm
Ah, I see. Mine always seem too short... like, 700 words. [about one page]
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Here's something off the top of my head:
life is a flower.
we wait for it
to bloom
but when we finally stand back to admire its beauty,
it might wilt the next day.
;o; Wow. That doesn't even seem like something I would write. o___o
but its kind of fun to just write stuff off the top of my head. Again! n___n :
I don't want to wet my feet.
let me submerge myself
in the waves
until I'm gasping for air,
and then push me down again so I can continue to see the sand below.
o______O It seems emo to me somehow. ><
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:21 pm
 Sorry, I was looking for pictures under the title of Rabbit Army (for reasons unknown to those except me >>), and I found this. Ya know, those do seem kinda emo. XD Your not going emo on me are you o:
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:05 am
o: ZOOOOMG. WE'VE BEEN CAUGHT! ME AND MY ARMY SURRENDER! ;o;
nope. :] -teleports away- here's my schedule of super powers and diseases:
monday: leprosy
tuesday: RAAAABIES
wednesday: teleportation
thursday: nothing yet. xD
and on fridays, i think inside the box. c:
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:04 pm
I never leave the box. Because inside is where all the originallity is. All the other stuff is outside. Especially with them tellin' everyone to "Think Outside The Box"....And they have comfy beds in their....
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:23 pm
Indeed. c:
If only we could all be square. :[
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:57 am
Hhhhmmm...I would rather be an octagon! Or a dodecagon! Mmmmmmm.........
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:07 pm
I'll be a triangle! A right triangle, to be exact. o:
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:21 pm
So your a right triangle, and I'm an octagon or a dodecagon.......
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:40 am
yup. c:
sounds like a plan! o:
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PandaEnlightenment Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:15 pm
Ok. ^^
We haven't really talked much lately! gonk
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