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Um...Advice and Critque Please!~~

IceKit_XxX

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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:31 pm

Yeah. Any advice or critique to help me advance myself with my art would be much appreciated.

Many thanks in advance to those who help. ^.^

EDIT!!~~: Here's a link to a few of the pictures instead!~~
Each drawn with a different medium.

Picture 1 - (Hand Drawn Pencil)
Picture 2 - (Hand drawn and colored)
Picture 3 - (CG with tablet)

Also I think it'll be fun if you tell me which you like best. ^.^

Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 2:44 pm

Not official warning, but still warning.

Do not send a link to your gallery or show 20 million pictures and ask for critique. Instead, pick out your best/favorite one and ask for critique on that. It makes it easier for others to help. So, please edit your post and have a link to one or two pictures. (I don't think it's in the list of rules, so it's not really your fault... it should be in the list of rules though o.o)

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IceKit_XxX

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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:29 pm

Oh! I'm sorry. sweatdrop I didn't realize until after I posted that this might have been a bad idea. I'll just change the link to a picture then. Thanks for the warning before I did anything really stupid. biggrin

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:16 pm

my favorite picture was the second one!
i just think that you need to work on your shading nd proportions ..
i noticed how you would do great with the upper body but then the transition between the waist to the feet would be off
but i really like your style "long nd lean" lol very cool! but sometimes you over-do-it ("and then it snowed") nd you're quite good with chibi biggrin

super crazy awesome advice! :
- if you're a doodler carry those mini markers or color pencils nd a mini sketchbook .. COLOR! NO-LINES! lol loose-leaf paper tends to ruin a picture so yeah
- try drawing without references nd study the natural motion nd positions of the body so that you can reference but still keep originality in your work
-- hope this helped! wink good luck!

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IceKit_XxX

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Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:40 pm

OwO Thank you SO much for the advice. Unfortunatley, my small sketchbook ran out of pages about two days ago. >w>

And I finally have some decent sketchbooks for teh drawing. biggrin And some new pens. So hopefully if I can remember about this account, I'll post some more links. ...Or perhaps I should join with my main. TwT

Anywayz!~~ Thanks for the EXTREMELY helpful feedback!~~

Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:46 pm

my favorite one was the first one

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