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 Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:22 pm
Life of a high schooler
High school is a great time period for most people. They make lots of friends, learn what they want to do as hobbies, and sometime even find love. although some high schooler hate this years as they will create enemy's or even by bulled. Let us find out what your high school experiences are like.
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:25 pm
Character Format: [b]Gaia name:[/b]
[b]Character name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]High school grade:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Pic:[/b]
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:52 pm
Characters: Gaia name: Sogar Dagor Character name: Erick Gender: Male High school grade: Senior Age: 17 Pic:  ___________________________________________________________________________________ Gaia name: magenta rosealee 81 Character name:Sikia Gender: Female High school grade: Junior Age: 16 Pic: 
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:48 pm
Erick rolled over and hit the snooze button on his alarm. It ready 7:02 which meant that he had sleeped through the alarm for 2 minutes. He closed his eyes and rubbed them to him wake himself up. Then started to stretch out but since he was still laying in bed these didn't really work. It was the first day of school and Erick wasn't really for it. He had been partying all night and was surprised that he had even woke up this morning. He through his legs out of bed and sat there at the edge looking around his room. he sat there for a good couple of minutes before deciding to get ready.
After getting dressed and ready for the day Erick went down stairs, his mother had something ready for him to eat on the table but he didn't fill like eating that much. "Hi mom, I think I'm going to skip breakfast this morning and head straight to school." Erick mother turned around from the stove, "Ok but you had better eat something when you get back." Erick turned around as he left the house to answer her, "Yea ok." He closed the door behind him and headed for his car.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:41 pm
Sikia got woken up at 6:40 by her twin brother Demtri " Sikia wake up i am done taking a shower it is your turn."Sika said " Ok Demtri thanx i will get up as soon as you leave the room." Demtri said " Ok if you say so." Sikia waited for her brother to get out of the room, he did and she stretched to wake her self up she was excited to start school.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:01 pm
Sikia went down stairs to see what was for breakfast. her mom told her and Demtri that there was bacon, eggs, toast, and juice for breakfast, so Demtri and Sikia ate and then headin to school in Demtri's Mercades then arrived at school around 8:00.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:17 pm
Erick was very proud of his car.  His parents had given it to him for his last birthday. As he jumped into the drive sit and started up the car he turned on one of his CD's and cranked the volume. It didn't take him that long to get to school as he only lived 10 miles away. He pulled into the parking lot butt didn't turn off his car. He just sat there listening to the music and looking around at every one that was walking in to the school. They had another 15 minutes till he had to be to class so he didn't really gory about going inside.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:26 pm
Sikia went to the front desk with her brother. trying to find their lockers so they can get a little organized.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:36 pm
Erick finally fond one of his friends. he turned off his car and jumped out. He called out to him, "Hey Derick wait up." He stopped and tunned to see Erick. He started to laugh but Erick didn't know why. As he got closer Erick started to ask why, "So whats so funny."
"Well I wasn't expecting to see you here this morning and it funny that you are here this early."
Erick laughed a little, "I guess your right." He had never really thought about it, he just left for school. They started to wake into the school, "So where are you going," Erick asked as he looked around at all the students walking the hall.
"To the office to get my schedule. You might as well come with me as I'm sure you don't have yours."
Erick laughed, "Sure what ever." And they started to move through the crow towards the office.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:43 pm
Sikia forgot to get her schedule from the front desk. Demtri went with her to get his. "Excuse me may i get mine and my brothers schedule"
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:56 pm
As Erick walked into the office and looked at the front desk he spotted this very beautiful young lady. He didn't recognize her so he decided to ask Derick about it, "He man hows that hot babe there." He pointed at her as he was to her back and figured that she wouldn't notice.
"Thats, Sikia Remember."
Erick shock his head, "no I don't really but I will soon enough." he walked over to the front desk and asked the lady standing behind her to get his schedule. He had made sure to be next to Sikia so he would have an excuse to talk to her. He looked to his side and acted surprised, "Oh hey Sikia, how are you doing." He tried his best to make his voice sound like his was shocked to see her there.
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:14 pm
Sikia and her brother got their schedules. "thanks here you go demtri how about we go find where our lockers are now" Demtri said " sure lets go "
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:04 pm
Sikia found her class room and waited for her class to begin. the teacher told them where to sit and sure enough she sat by her friend Marnia. Marnia was so happy that the teacher sat them by each other. Marnia said " So Sikia how was ur morning so far." Sikia said" It has been great i thought i heard Erick say something to me this morning but i never found him"
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:19 am
((Alright, a couple of notes I've made while reading this. Overall, it needs some work. I know there is not much of a plot and whatnot, and I see where it should be headed, however, the problems I see are as follows:
First, there is not enough character interaction between you two. I saw an attempt near the end, but it trailed off into nothing. Second, I'm seeing a lot of double posting. Basically, double posting is when one person posts after their own post, before they let the other person react to what they did in the first post. Magenta is the only one doing this, so just keep in mind that double posting is not proper form.
I am very big on grammar, and Sogar already told me not to say anything about it, but please take the extra time to proof-read your posts before submitting them. Read it over, make sure it makes sense. It takes a bit more time, but it will be well worth it in the long run. If you miss something after you have submitted it, or even if you catch it later on, go back and edit the post. It makes it easier for people to read and understand.
Last thing, description. The posts are fairly short, but this is the place to learn how to make your posts longer. Add the description of what is around you, what your character is thinking, and what they are actually doing. You will find that a little bit of description goes a long way. For instance, what is the layout of the school? Is there only one floor? How many students attend there? Is it a private, or public school? Things like this will give new life to an RP. Just think about the details that would be important for the other people to know.
That is the end of my rant, try to use some of these tips to make some better posts. Keep it up and don't give up. I am always available if you have any questions about the RP, or about RP in general. Thank you for your time.))
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