I am beginning to notice a pattern in your poetry, BRB. You use simplistic wording, which, in and of itself is not always such a bad thing. Though, when it is combined with a lack of grammar principles, it somewhat cripples your poems by making them seem rushed and not thought out. My suggestion to you is to try and use more "flowery" words in your next poem. See if you can find stronger imagery for the reader. Pull your emotions out and write about them in full. I know you can do it!