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 Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 10:54 am
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Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 12:50 pm
It was a fairly good beginning. It would have been better if it were a bit longer. You mispelled "does" in one sentence though. Might want to fix that. Otherwise it was fine, just too short.
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Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 7:24 pm
chapter one was more of a teaser than anything. You know so I could post up the idea and get around to it later. I got like three other projects I need to finish up. One is Toys(another fanfic which is awesome) the other is a fanfic of toys and the last I'm publishing for money sooo yeah... Its gana be a while before I make the real chapter one...
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:36 pm
Well, as far as teasers go, it's pretty good. I'm not sure I'm totally sold on this character as the Madgod, but I can see it, definately.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:50 pm
It sounds NOTHING like me! Nothing. Except for the parts that were close. They sounded EXACTLY like me! Your madness is controlled. You can not control madness, that is the whole POINT of madness! It's insane! Brutal! Volitile.
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