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 Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 8:59 pm
Hey guys I just wanted to dicuss with all in the pack, if it was okay for me to write a story, using some parts of Shero's dreams, and part of the mini-guild. I've had this idea in my head for along time, and it would be fiction. So before I actually finished it... I wanted to ask all in the pack. It will be in the point of view of all of us, but mostly me because thats how I write, plus I'll keep everyone updated. So just tell me okay ^^
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 1:25 pm
That's fine with me, Freki, but in the future, just write it in your point of view, as it's a little unfair to assume something is how a member of the Pack would react to a certain event. Also... Please have someone edit it... You don't exactally have the bestest best best grammar in the world. Can't wait to see how it turns out ^^ ~Christi EDIT: Going off Freki's idea, what if we were to do a story where all of us write our own section at a time, going off what the previous member had written? Like that thing we did with Zierra, Rika and Kari?
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:09 pm
That sounds awesome... and jow do you remember the names? Except Kari of course... Oh my next post will have what I have so far in the story... and I need approval of changed names... Bell-Bell is staying Bella... but what about you two? I'm Daviel by the way... just to hide who we really are... ^^
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:17 pm
I just remember those kinds of things, I guess.
.__. Hide it from who?
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:21 pm
To be a true one, one must be born one. True blood running through your veins. To be one, one must be changed by something true and pure. To love one, is to have the same adrenaline rush as one, the same intensity and passion as one. But to fear one, is to be hunted by one, to tempt one is to tempt all. We live as one, breathe as one, and hunt as one. We feel as one, we are one in the same but also one as different. We are the Lupinar.
To be born as one makes you feel different, because you are different. You have this extra rush in your soul, and heightened abilities. You feel free and pure, but also as an outsider to society. It feels as if everyone around you knows and stares because of your difference. One out of very limited few bloodlines is born, and I'm one of the lucky ones. Myself and a few others make up one Lupinar, in definition a Lupinar is a gathering place for a pack such as ourselves. A pack receives the location of it's Lupinar by it's Guardian Deity or Spirit. It is usually impossible for another pack or a human to find this certain place unless told by a member of the pack. Many rules are followed by a pack, and a pack is very loyal to each in it's group. As well as certain 'classes' which are usually set by birth. I am a Frekki, A third in command to the two leaders of the pack. I am the peacekeeper and enforcer of the Lupa. Prized above all under me, I am sought for when a difficult decision is set in the pack. The Ulfric is our leader, usually male, ours is rare, one of a kind female. Usually the strongest, she guides us. Lupa, second leader but tied with the Ulfric is also of the female species. Then a bit below I is our Geri, although slightly below me, she has the same attributes as I but different abilities. We are the Lukoi, the pure and true. Others of the pack: the Hati and the Skoll are below the Geri and I. The Hati is named for the one that chases the moon in Norse mythology and is a protector of the Ulfric and Lupa. More aware at night than the Skoll. The Skoll is named for the one that chases the sun in Norse mythology, same as the Hati is also a protector, but better and more aware in the daylight. We are secret, and many are unaware of us. Many don't even know the existence of the Lukoi. But the ones that do either fear us, or hunt for us. This is where our story begins, and where the world will finally know of our existence. We are pure, true born Lukoi.
Our names have been concealed for years to others, for the safety of our friends and family. But as well as ourselves as a Lukoi, a pack. We refer to ourselves in nicknames. I have been given the role of Daviel. I am the Frekki.
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:43 pm
correction I love how that sounds, but Lupinar is a place, not a term for a Pack. Try Lukoi 3nodding *** Red Flame Hikari Neko One out of very limited few bloodlines is born... correction Try "One out of a very limited few bloodlines are born..." *** *** Red Flame Hikari Neko I am the peacekeeper and enforcer of the Lupa. correction Ulfric --> Freki, Lupa --> Geri *** Red Flame Hikari Neko ...ours is a rare, one of a kind female. squee Joo called me one-of-a-kind >w< *** Red Flame Hikari Neko ...bit below I is our Geri... *** Red Flame Hikari Neko But the ones that do either fear us, or hunt for us. correction But the ones that do either fear us, or hunt for us. *** correction Always make Pack capatalized. *** This is WAY better than anything of your's I have ever read O.o
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:44 pm
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 2:57 pm
I had to do my daily run sorry ^^ Oh and thanks for the corrections, I'll be sure to change them^^
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:04 pm
If you're going to change all the names, make mine either Crystal or Cleo, whichever you like better.
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:09 pm
I'm going to go with Crystal it goes better with our names... now we just need Brenna's... Oh I just made the corrections ^^ Told ou when I'm in the mood my stuff comes out really good... oh and I'm trying to make the cover... who knew photoshop on photobucket was so hard... I found the Perfect pic for the cover... but if my photoshopping doesn't work... do you mind drawing it? This pic came to me in a dream and I looked it up... which started the whole story thing... and so did a song...
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:14 pm
Sure, PM me the pic and tell me who's who. Um... if it has Hait, Skoll or Derek as Humans, I won't be able to draw them sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:23 pm
Okay hold on........................................................................................
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Here: ^^
 (You: Biggest/front head. Derek: Small staning next to you're head. Brenna: Large standing next to you. Bell-Bell: Next head thats tilted. Hati & Skoll: Standing small, and Me: Howling ^^)
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:27 pm
Whoops you said... PM... Lo siento T.T
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:27 pm
'Kay ^^ I'm trying that whole photoshop thingy on photobucket, I didn't even know it was there >w<
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Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:35 pm
So... i don't want you to feel like we'd be taking over your story, but since you alread have an awesome intro how 'bout we do my idea with your story line? That way all the reactions and stuff would be closer to how everyone'd actually react?
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