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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 12:07 pm


All My Heart Sees
I hope you can forgive me
Because you are the only one my heart sees.
Through good and bad.
Through happy and sad.
You’ve always been here.
You’ve always been near.

The only one for me
Will always be the only one my heart sees
And my heart only sees you.
I hope your heart only sees me, too.

I have learned to follow my heart
And my heart has told me we’ll never be apart.
You are the only one my heart loves.
And my chest my heart constantly shoves
Whenever you come near.
Your voice my heart longs to hear.

My heart yearns for you all the time
Because you are what makes my life shine.
You are the love of my life
And your smile cuts through me like a knife.

So, please, stay with me,
Because it is only you my heart sees.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:47 am



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I like how it rhymes. biggrin
When I first read it, I thought it was song lyrics, but I wasn't entirely sure...

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Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:14 am


I just wrote it to be a poem...didn't think about song, but I see what you mean.
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