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I wrote a Skip Beat fanfic story! Please check it out!

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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 2:29 pm

Hey everyone! I wrote a fanfic finally. It's a spoiler free one-shot and centers around Kyoko and Ren's first kiss (calm down - it's tastefully done I think) and Yashiro teasing Ren. Please check it out and let me know what you think! biggrin

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4243771/1/Light_and_Dark_Kisses

Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 9:56 pm

sweatdrop

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4hikari

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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:06 pm

I'm going to comment as I read. 'Cause I have nothing better to do. sweatdrop

1st chapter: Yashiro flustered Ren! *cheers for Yashiro* xd
2nd: *having flashbacks to book 12*
3rd: "Awkward" *laughing* ...Yes Kyoko, Ren is "dedicated" *more laughing* She's clueless as always...
4th:...Ren caught Yashiro and Kyoko = not good.... Ren stealing back kisses = slightly creepy sweatdrop
5th: ....*sigh of relief* Bo lives to give advice to Ren another day! xd ...Yashiro's gloves!! Save the technology! *is proud of you for remembering such a small detail* ...He does deserve a raise. 3nodding

Overall review: Cute and well written. 3nodding

Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:31 pm

um well i thought it was good but i thought ren stealing back kisses was alittle creapy sweatdrop sweatdrop

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cbee

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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 8:01 pm

lol Thanks for the feedback! The kissing was awkward to write since I didn't want it to get lemony on me. But thanks for commenting on the story! heart heart heart

Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 6:11 pm

OMG!!! whats weird is I read it before i read this post ad it was one of my favs! LOVE IT!! heart heart heart

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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:41 am

Wow! Thanks so much! Once school starts to settle down I'll start writing more. Hugs Magumi! Yay!

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