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SuperNova013 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:48 am
She did her make-up, dressed up nice, and even bought new shoes. Tonight would be a night to remember!
She arrived at the place.
Fancy.
He greeted her, gave her a kiss, and then sat her down, Light conversation. They ordered.
Oh Look! A tennis bracelet around the lobster claw… how original
They danced, nice and slow, almost time for the big surprise!!
She sat him down, giving him a fake sweet smile, so the last thing he knew would be love, even if it was just part of the job.
She reached into her purse and felt a trigger.
It turns out she works for Russia!
He pulls out a gun of his own; she finds a bullet through her skull.
Surprise, Surprise…
He works for the U.S.
((don't ask me what i was thinking when i wrote tis, i was flipping back and fourth between a russian docummentary and Mr. & Mrs. Smith, so i think that covers the reason... R&R))
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 6:07 pm
It's a good story. Only problems with it, it could have been longer. Are you goign to extend it? Aside from the shortness it's really good.
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