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Tamwynne the elven
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PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 7:43 am


Why do people say things
that they don't mean?
It gives me headaches
makes me want to scream
because of the lies
the tears on my cheeks have stained my eyes
the scars on my wrisits
just remind me each day
of each pain, each love, each pain
Which never happened to me...
My friends tell me
they are in love
Why can't that happen to me?
Is there something wrong...
I'm blonde, I'm smart, I wish
for these things
But yet, yet, yet,
I just lie here on the floor
feeling the pain
of lonliness
PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:19 am


that's good. mrgreen

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 1:36 pm


it was okay, but pretty morbid.
besides, talking about scars on your wrists is a little generic.
the meaning made sense though. you should keep trying to become better.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:50 am



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I totally get that. I went through something like that... but I didn't cut myself by any means.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:05 am


my sister was friends with my friends girlfriend once, and she sent her this 10 page long poem about a girl freakin cutting herself the whole time, and once i read the last of it... i was thinking "What the heck? did this even have a point, other that proving the main character was a drama queen?"
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