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 Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 5:04 pm
Falling into His Traps
Walking alone,
Crying alone,
I was always alone.
Never scared of the dark,
Or scared of a bark.
Always writing to feel like I belong.
Hated by everyone,
Until HE came along.
He talked to me.
He made me feel like I belong.
He called me on the phone,
Talked to me for hours.
Everyone told me to stay away,
They told me he was bad.
And that he had no heart.
So I did as I was told.
I stopped talking to him.
Until one morning,
He said the “L” word.
I was shocked,
Could this boy,
The one with no heart,
Be the same boy that said the “L” word?
He called me on the phone,
Told me how he was,
Asked me to come over,
And I said no.
I asked him where he was,
He said in his car.
He told me he knew where I live,
And that I should be scared.
He told me goodbye,
And that he had to go,
I said see ya.
I knew It’d show,
The real him.
The one that was hiding,
Underneath all the nice.
Now I have a stalker,
All because I fell into his traps.
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Posted: Thu May 01, 2008 5:52 pm
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 7:56 pm
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:40 pm
What are you talking about?! It's awesome!! A little creepy but awesome none the less.
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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 10:55 pm
Thanks. I really liked writing this poem. I think I'm gonna write one similar to it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 2:12 pm
of all the poems ive red on this forum, i think that this one is the best. it shows how everyone really has to sides.
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:16 pm
This poem just came to me and it was one of my best ones. But I recently made another one and I think it is way better than this one.
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:16 pm
wow... last time i told someone the "l" word, i didnt turn into a psycho.
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 3:40 pm
It isn't lyrical...I don't feel much for it and it has no flow to me. Some of it was good, but then its like you hit a wall. When I write, and I hit something odd, I start over. You hit bumps but you plow through them. Art takes time, and if this took you a long time then i'm not sure what to say. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:03 pm
It didn't take me long at all to write poem and all the others seem to like it. This poem is depressing but its true. It shows the sides to people.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 5:26 pm
But its not even that! its not depressing rave...it was like reading prose.
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 4:44 pm
Then why did you say it was depressing? If you don't like it then don't read it. Others like it, so I will keep it posted.
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