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 Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2005 5:37 pm
I made a Drama story a while back, while I was goin out wit CB. I was on my MyOtaku readin it and I was tryin not to burst out laughin. ~laughs~ I was really in love wit this guy. I wonder what happened......... well anyway hope everyone likes it. ^.^
Chapter 1
My POV
It all started one day online. I was talking to my 2 friends in a chatroom: Ryan and Shay. We were talking about me not eating so I can loose weight. They kept arguing with me that I should eat. But I couldn't stand being fat. The week after that, Ryan was worried that I would be anorexic and starve myself. During school GYM, everyone was doing the dailey warm up. I heard the GYM teachers talk about a private GYM trainer. I stoped what I was doing and went to them. I asked them if the trainer did kids and they said yes. They said he does it on the weekends in the GYM at school. I asked how and they said all I have to do is have a parents signature and they can sign me up. They gave me the form and I was walking away happily back to the dailey warm ups.
Ryan's POV
Shay and I tried to convince Jamie that she should eat, but in result, she debated more. Who knows what she could do? We were in GYM, doing our daily exercises to warm up. I was talking with Nicole and kept my eye on Jamie. I didn't want her to over do it and give herself an asthma attack. She got up and walked over to the teachers. "Hey Nicole?" I asked, watching her look up from her foot grab. "What?" she asked, in her soft voice. "Why is Jamie talking to the GYM teachers?" "I don't know." She shrugged and went back to her foot grab. "I hope it's good," I spoke, worriness in my voice. Nicole and I changed to push ups and were quiet. Then Jamie came back with a paper in her hand.
Chapter 2
My POV
I went back to my spot and was finishing my crunches. "What's that?" Ryan and Nicole asked while finishing their push ups. "You'll see," I said. Nicole and Ryan were looking at eachother with confused faces. "When?" Ryan asked while starting to do crunches. I looked at the forum before so I didn't have to look at it again to tell them. "Monday," I replied. Nicole and Ryan went back to the dailey warm ups without saying a word for the next few minutes. They were probably thinking about what the form was for and what is on Monday. Well, when it's Monday, they're going to meet the new Jamie.
Ryan's POV
I watched Jamie as she did crunches. "What's that?" both, me and Nicole asked. We straightened ourself up from the push ups. "You'll see," she spoke. A wide smile rolled onto her face. I looked at Nicole and we both had confused expression on our faces. I looked back to Jamie. "When?" I asked. My body began to get recklace from the anxiousness so I started to do crunches. "Monday," she replied. Those were the last words I heard her say. We went back to our exercises. 'I hope whatever it is,' I thought, 'it'll have a good result in the end.'
Chapter 3
My POV
When I got home, I told my mom about the GYM trainer and she agreed to sign me up. I saw the times on the form and knew my dad wouldn't be able to pick me up on his regular spending time days. My mom called him up and told him I would be busy on those days. I was very happy. By the end of the week on Friday, my friend Nicole and Ryan were wondering why I was happy since the day we had GYM. I told them I had a surprise for them on Monday. They said they couldn't wait. I couldn't wait either. The day was almost over and I couldn't wait for the weekend. Once I left school I knew on Monday, I would be a new person.
Ryan's POV
It was the end of the week and Jamie has been happier than ever. She told us she had an extra specila surprise for us on Monday. I was mainly wondering what it was. I just told her I couldn't wait. Same with Nicole. When school was over, throughout the whole weekend, I wondered what the surprise was; good or bad?
Chapter 4
My POV
Well, it was Monday. I was at school walking to the school door with Nicole and I just had a rough weekend with a GYM trainer. I weighed 99 pounds, was very skinny, and wearing smaller clothes like jeans. Everyone was like "Wow!" I was walking in the hallway with Nicole. I said, "You think anyone will notice the difference?" She said, "Yeah." While walking with Nicole, I kept my head down but Brigitt saw me. I walked in the classroom. Brigitt said, "Wow! I have to tell Ryan." Ryan wasn't here yet so, I went to my locker and put my stuff in my locker. Ryan was at his locker so he didn't see me. I heard Brigitt say, "Ryan! Ryan! You have to see Jamie's pants!"
Ryan's POV
School. Jamie. The surprise. This is where it will be revealed. I wanted to run, run as fast as I can down teh hallway. Oh, this surprise makes me so anxious! Too bad I can't due to teachers. I took my time walkign to my lcokers. Good thing our lcokers are just across from each other. I got to my locker and just started to put my stuff in. Brigitt came running to me. She stopped and said, "Ryan! Ryan! You have to see Jamie's pants!"
Chapter 5
My POV
DJ, Brigitt, and Ryan walked towards me. I saw Ryan's face and he was amazed. DJ was upset because she always says I starve myself to death. She said, "Oh my god! You starved yourself skinny!" I said, "No. I just had a rough weekend with a GYM trainer." Ryan said, "You didn't have to do this for me." I said "Ryan, It's okay. I wanted to do this. Besides, I finally reached my goal. I'm skinny." Ryan said, "But how did you lose so much weight over the weekend?" I said "Well, me and the trainer were in the GYM and the trainer was very rough." I could tell Ryan wasn't happy. He looked scared in his eyes since I lost so much weight in a small amount of time. He was thinking I might of hurt myself somehow. I wanted to know if it was true. "Ryan? You look...well...scared." Ryan was speechless. "I'm afraid you hurt yourself because you lost a lot of weight in a small amount of time." I knew it. I was right. I tried to calm him down. "Ryan, don't worry. I feel fine." Ryan's face looked like he was still scared.
Ryan's POV
Pants? That's it? Must be pretty darn good looking pants then. I turned around and stopped. Yes, tehy were indeed amazing pants. They were jeans, something Jamie would never wear, but it wasn't that. It was her. She looked incredable skinny. It was hard to believe it was only two days that she was another person. Now, she was different. DJ, Brigitt, and I waalked over to her. Jamie looked at my face, kowing it was filled with shockness of all kinds. DJ, on the other hand, looked upset. She was always the one nagging to Jamie the most to eat and not starve herself. She said, "On my god! You starved yourself skinny!" Jamie had a blank expression on her face as if nothing happened. "No," Jamie spoke, "I just had a rough weekend with a GYM trainer. I stood up. "You didn't have to do this for me." She smiled at what I said. Just an innocent smile. "Ryan, it's ok. I wanted to do this,"-Oh, how calm she spoke as if it was nothing!-"Besides, I finally reached my goal. I'm skinny." My fist began to clentch as I angered. "But how did you lose so much weight over the weekend?" I tried to keep my voice down. I could feel myself feel scared on what could have happened to her. "Well, me and the trainer were in the GYM and the trainer was very rough." There's no way possible she could lose such a large amount of weight in a little amount of time. It's not healthy! She must have examined me throughly. She spoke, "Ryan? You...look...well...scared." I didn't know what to say. That she could ahve badly injured herself? Could've even killed herself? No. Stay calm, Ryan, stay calm. "I'm afraid you hurt yourself because you lost you lost a lot of weight in a small amount of time." "Ryan,"-her voice, calm as ever-"don't worry. I feel fine." She might feel fine, but doesn't mean she is.
Chapter 6
My POV
The rest of the day was kinda the same. Everyone was amused on how skinny I was and that I was finally wearing jeans. But I knew that Ryan was still scared. I told him over and over "Don't worry Ryan, I'm fine." I could tell he wasn't believing me. During the classes I had, I was just thinking about my work and everything. It was like nothing happened. When the classes were over, it was lunch time. Something told me, Ryan was going to ask me about what I ate during the weekend. I was walking with Nicole to the table and I was ready for Ryan. I sat down in my regular seat and so did Nicole. I saw Ryan walk by to get his lunch. He was probably seeing what I had for lunch. I had nothing.
Ryan's POV
Whenever I saw Jamie, there was always someone complimentin wit amazment on her new body. The smile I thought I never see was on her face. But somethin wasn't right. The fear inside me told that it was a dangerour mistake in doin what she did. Everytime I passed her in the hallway, she would tell me, "Don't worry Ryan, I'm fine." No, she can't be fine. Of the classes I had after that, I thought over what she could have done wit that GYM trainer. Why would such a GYM trainer do that? Who is this GYM trainer? And for the most important question, what did she eat? The classes were over and it was time for lunch. I wlaked to lunch alone, thinkin of what to exactly ask Jamie. Both her and Nicole were off before me. In teh cafeteria, I walked by the table and looked where Jamie was. For lunch, what ddi she have for lunch? My eyes widened as I saw nothin in front of her.
Chapter 7
My POV
Ryan kept walking and I kept staring. I knew he wasn't going to be happy to see I didn't have a lunch. The week before the weekend, I didn't eat my lunch. I didn't even have a lunch. He wasn't very happy. Ryan was walking back with his lunch and I still didn't have anything. "Hey guys," Ryan said as he sits down. "Hey," I said calmly. Everyone at our side of the table was looking at me. "What are you guys starring at?" I asked. Ryan spoke for them, "You don't have a lunch again. What did you eat over the weekend with that Trainer anyway?" I didn't know what to tell him. I was silent for a long time. "Jamie," Ryan was getting impatient. "What did you eat?" I looked down to the table.
Ryan's POV
I kept on walkin to get my lunch. My fists were semi-clectched. I can't believe she isn't eatin her lunch. The week before she didn't eat her lunch either. Now, she doesn't have a lunch. I was NOT happy. No, I was mad. I came walkin back wit my lunch. I took in a breathe and spoke. "Hey guys," and I sat down. "Hey," Jamie spoke as calmly as ever. Everyone, includin me, starred at Jamie. "What are you guys starrin at?" she asked. I decided to speak for them. "You don't have a lunch again. What did you eat over the weekend with that Trainer anyway?" She stayed silent for a long time. Too much time. "Jamie," I spoke wit impatientness in my voice. "What did you eat?" She looked down at the table.
Chapter 8
"Jamie, don't tell me you didn't eat," Ryan sounded worried again. "Of course I ate," I said. The look on his face told me he wasn't believing a word I said. He asked me the question. "What did you eat?" I knew he was going to ask me that. If I don't have a lunch it's quite obvious that he would ask. "I ate......" I said as I began. "You ate.....?" Ryan really wanted to know the truth. Then, I just said something obvious "I ate food," Ryan was impatient again. "What 'food' did you eat? He asked "I ate but did more exercise the next day," I said. Ryan was still impatient. "You're avoiding the question," I gave up. I had to tell them. "Okay," I began. "I ate apples, celery, watermelon, stuff like that, and whatever I had for dinner and breakfast." Ryan knows every Sunday I have the same breakfast with my dad: 2 scramble eggs, an English muffin and home fries. But he doesn't know I wasn't with my dad or even saw him. My dinners were always random.
Chapter 9
Ryan and the rest of the people at my table was back to normal. They finally believed me and talked. I started talking with Nicole and Ryan. "I heard we have GYM tomorrow." "Yeah," Nicole said. "I don't like GYM." "You don't like GYM?" I asked. "How can you not like it?" Nicole took a while to answer since she was finishing chewing her cucumber sandwich. "I just don't like it." "I love GYM too Jamie," Ryan said as he eats some chips. I looked at Ryan. "I know you do. I wonder what we are doing tomorrow." "I hope we walk the track," Nicole said. "Me too!" Ryan said quickly. "Same here," I said. Soundly lunch was over and it was time to go back to class.
Chapter 10
The next day, Nicole and I couldn't wait to get to GYM. We hoped we could walk the track. It was Day 3 so after GYM we had lunch so we had to bring our lunches with us. The class before GYM felt like it was never going to end. "Come on clock," I said softly to myself. "C'mon! Just 5 more minutes." That was it. I couldn't do anything but look at the clock. Luckily, the teacher wasn't paying attention and in no time, it was finally time for GYM. Nicole went to her locker while I went to mine. We got our clothes and she was getting her lunch also. I didn't have one so I didn't get mine. I saw Ryan go to his locker while I was waiting to Nicole's locker while she got her lunch. I heard a voice behind me and didn't even have to turn around. I knew that voice from anywhere. "Hey guys." It was Ryan.
Chapter 11
I turned around and said, "Hi." Nicole got her lunch out and we were ready to go. While walking in the hallway Ryan saw I didn't have a lunch. "Jamie?" I looked at Ryan. "Yeah?" Why don't you have a lunch?" he asked. I didn't know why I didn't have a lunch but for one reason. "I'm usually never hungry after GYM." "If you say so," Ryan said. When we got to GYM, Nicole and I went in the girl's locker room and changed while Ryan went in the boy's locker room and changed. By the time we got out for got with our strands and sat down. Ryan and Nicole are in the same strand, strand 10. I'm in strand 11. My GYM teacher took attendence and once she was done we went into the middle of GYM.
Chapter 12
Nicole and Ryan were already there. Once everyone was in the middle, one of the GYM teachers started talking. "Today, you're going to decide what to do," she began. "You can either walk the track, play basketball, or Tennis. Ryan, Nicole and I always walk the track so we just walked to the track and once I got on the track I said, "Guys I'm just going to run a lap." Nicole and Ryan said. "Okay." Then, Ryan said, "How about I join you?" I said, "I'm faster now since I lost weight. I might loose you." He said. "It's okay." I said, "Nicole, we will be right back. Well, I will be. Ready Ryan?" "Yeah," He said. "On 3. 1......2......3!" I started running and so did Ryan. Nicole watched while walking. Ten seconds later I was ahead and Ryan was running out of breathe. He stopped and I yelled out behind me, "I'll catch you guys on the next lap!" Ryan was out of breathe so he couldn't say anything.
Chapter 13
I was right behind Ryan and Nicole. I wasn't out of breathe. I was starting to go past them but Ryan said, "Jamie?" I stopped running and starting walking, "Yeah?" Ryan asked, "Did you eat today?" "Uhhh," I began. "Well?" Ryan said. I had to tell Ryan the truth, "No. I didn't eat today." Ryan was shocked. "Did you eat breakfast?" I said, "No. I didn't eat one thing today." Ryan and Nicole stopped walking. "Jamie!" Nicole said. "You need to eat!" "I'm fine," I said while running again. I ran 2 more laps and I passed them. That was the last time I passed them. I was right behind them and Ryan saw me. I was breathing very hard. "Jamie, are you okay?" he asked. "Yeah. You don't looks so good." Nicole said. "I'm.....fine," I said while walking crooked. "Just a little......dizzy."
Chapter 14
I didn't feel okay at all. I couldn't see straight. I was holding my head and walked into the grass. "Jamie!" Ryan yelled. But it was too late. I was so dizzy I couldn't stand up. I should have listened to Ryan and Nicole. I should have ate. "Ryan..." I said softly. "Jamie!" Nicole and Ryan both yelled. It was too late. I fell onto the grass and everything went black. "Jamie! No!" Ryan's eyes started to water a little bit. "Jamie.....no....."
Chapter 15
I woke up half an hour later in the Nurses office. I felt someone holding my hand. I opened my eyes and it was Ryan. I tried to get up but I couldn't. "Don't get up, rest." I went back down. "What time is it?" I asked. I looked at the clock. "Wow! GYM ended 5 minutes ago!" "Ryan looked at the clock too while still holding my hand. "It did," he began. "I have been here the whole time with you." My head was hurting. "What happened? I asked. Ryan was rubbing my hand gently. "You fainted because you ran so much and didn't eat today." "Oh," I said. "How long have you been here?" "Half an hour," he said. "Wow." I said. I was confused mostly on how I got here from the track. Somehow I knew Ryan did something. "Ryan?" I asked. "Yeah?" "What happened after I fainted?"
Chapter 16
It took a while for Ryan to talk but he finally started. "After you fainted, I was worried about you. When you fainted, I was speachless. You could have really hurt yourself by what you were doing! You know you should have eaten something!" I was listening to everything he was saying. Everything. I was starting to feel dizzy again. Ryan could tell so he was just on his knees by my side holding my hand. I saw Ryan's lunch and I told him I would be fine while he ate. I just laid down and he was eating. All I did was rest. Well, I wasn't skipping class. By the time it is class I'll be gone, out of the nurse's office, anyway.
Chapter 17
When he was done with his lunch, he had small lunch, he continued. "Once you fainted, I went to you and Nicole went to find a GYM teacher. I was really worried. Since you were on your stomach, I flipped you over so you would be on your back." I could tell Ryan's eyes were gettin all watery. "When I saw you like that, I was very scared. Nicole came back with a GYM teacher and, since you were so light, I picked you up and carried you like you were a bride. I think the all teachers got stupider anyway Nicole came with me with a pass from the GYM teacher so I wouldn't get in trouble for what I was doing." Ryan had to stop so he could atleast try to see. "When we got to the Nurse's Office, we told her you fainted in GYM and she told me to put you down in one of the beds. The GYM teacher already knew we were going to be there for a while so we didn't get to change. It's not like we were sweaty anyway." Ryan stopped once more.
Chapter 18
Ryan continued with his story. "Lunch was about to begin so I told Nicole she could go. She wouldn't go and it took a long time for me to convince her to go. I told her I was going to be fine. She went and I stayed with you. I just watched over you. The Nurse said it was fine for me to stay even if it was after lunch. Of course you could tell the nurse didn't really care. She said she would tell my teacher where I was and what happened." Ryan looked down for a moment. Then he looked back to me. Eye to eye. "It didn't look like you were going to wake up." Ryan stopped once more. It looked like he was mostly afraid that I wouldn't wake up. I guess that's why his eyes were all watery. "If you didn't wake up...." Ryan began while trying to hold back his tears. "I don't know what I would do without you!" I thought I would never see Ryan's eye water. But I could see a tear falling down his face. He rubbed it off so I wouldn't see. But I saw it, it might of been small, but I knew that he really thought I wasn't going to wake up.
Chapter 19
Hearing what Ryan said, I was speechless. I didn't know I caused so much with him. Lunch was almost over and I was almost over my dizziness. Ryan was stroking my hand again and said, "I never want to loose you." I just laid in silence. I looked at the clock and lunch was over. My dizziness was gone so I got up and just stood waiting for Ryan. "Ready to go?" I said. I acted like nothing happened. Ryan was afraid I would hurt myself. "Are you sure you can walk?" "Yes," I replied. Ryan got up from his knees and we started to walk. We told the Nurse we were going and we left. "Man, he was right. She doesn't care one bit....." We walked in the hallway to our classes. People were in the hallway coming back from lunch. It's like nothing happened. But Ryan and I know what happened back there..........
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:29 pm
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DarkAngel852 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 4:05 pm
OH YEAH I remeber me and ryan trying to convince you to stop eating you need to eat and stuff we were telling you that like 4 months ago or 3 ^.^
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 9:57 am
~falls on back laughin~ ^.^ i no!
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 1:42 pm
omg i cant belive u posted that
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 1:47 pm
~raises eyrbow~ y wouldn't i post that? it means a lot to me. the memories......WOA! over dramactic there! lol
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 1:51 pm
FullmetalEDlover ~raises eyrbow~ y wouldn't i post that? it means a lot to me. the memories......WOA! over dramactic there! lol lol dont need much details
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 1:55 pm
ryry627 FullmetalEDlover ~raises eyrbow~ y wouldn't i post that? it means a lot to me. the memories......WOA! over dramactic there! lol lol dont need much details
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DarkAngel852 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:03 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 4:16 pm
~face gets all red in embaressmeant but is angry~ SHAY! IT NOT FUNNY! ~mumbles~ grrr
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:55 am
-gets some makeup- anerexic people look too pale -gives- ^^ all better, remember its edible....
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Posted: Sun Oct 30, 2005 4:50 am
FullmetalEDlover ~face gets all red in embaressmeant but is angry~ SHAY! IT NOT FUNNY! ~mumbles~ grrr Yes it is this is my 8th time reading it and its still not old!
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