Well I didnt see anything saying that this was against the rules so here it goes.

I have been working on a Naruto story that is a romance Between Naruto and Hinata. I know its crap, but still I tried. Uh.. I don't think it would be good to post it on gaia because of the PG-13 rule, there are some parts where its... well a bit older than that.

I have about 29,600 hits and only about 151 comments. Since you guys seem to like creative critisizm i wanted a few more comments.

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=3402085

thats the URL and feel free to read and review.