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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:36 pm

I could come up with...... hmm....... 23 flaws in the first one, and about 17 in the second. For example, Mello's right eye is too small. Oh.... well........ I've got to cut back at criticizing myself.

Anyway, these are scanned works; therefore, you may find many annoying specs of whateverthehecktheyare's throughout them.

OH, I KNOW SOME OF THEM DON'T LOOK LIKE WHO THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO BE. SO BE QUIET ABOUT THAT. THANKS.

Oh, and........ no. I did not copy/trace. Don't get wrong ideas about me. If I did that, they would be 8934789237489298347 times better.

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:46 pm

i say they're pretty good
you can kinda tell who they are

if you tried drawing them in your own style then its alright but i suggest more practice to really come into your own

if you tried making them as close as the actual art then its off by a pretty large margin

you also seem to have trouble drawing closed mouths
or was that intentional?

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Calopterynx

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 8:55 am

they look awesome! heart
You are soooo good at drawing hair, and I think L looks exactly like he does in the manga...oh, and you can watch the live action Death Note with English subtitles on youtube...

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:56 pm

Calopterynx

they look awesome! heart
You are soooo good at drawing hair, and I think L looks exactly like he does in the manga...oh, and you can watch the live action Death Note with English subtitles on youtube...

Oh, yes. I'm aware of that. I have the Death Note movie DVDs. I'm just excited that they are coming to theaters.....even though it's a 2-day event.

Oh, and thanks. biggrin

(I think I have an obsession with the word "oh.")

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:58 pm

Riosuu

i say they're pretty good
you can kinda tell who they are

if you tried drawing them in your own style then its alright but i suggest more practice to really come into your own

if you tried making them as close as the actual art then its off by a pretty large margin

you also seem to have trouble drawing closed mouths
or was that intentional?

I guess I was trying to draw them with my style. I.... don't really like "copying" other people's art styles.

Yea, I kind of have an issue with mouths. They always turn out extremely weird with closed mouths. sweatdrop

Thanks. biggrin

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