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 Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:56 pm
There's something in the Wood!
There are things in the forest
Some are cursed, some are blessed
They're not normal, like the rest.
There's something in the wood!
The demons keep whom they take,
Faerie rage makes stones shake
Stay here with me, for my sake
There's something in the wood!
The Elven laugh and they play
as they lead you astray
When you return, none can say
There's something in the wood!
Draiads tun and Nereids sing
Naiads tease from their springs
Dangerous, though pretty things.
There's something in the wood!
Always the magic wood fear
Shun the witch and the Seer
Only dreamers welcome here.
There's something in the wood!
Undines vitilize spirit
While Sylphs inspire it
While Earth and land, Gnomes keep fit
There's something in the wood!
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 3:53 pm
this poem captured my attention from the very beginning....wonderful use of repition at the end of each verse...
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Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:38 pm
forgot to add. . .Comment and criticize plz!
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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:11 pm
You seem to have a good knolodge of nymphs. Impressive. What is a sylph, though? I don't think I've heard of that one...
I like this a lot. It makes it seem like you're running through the forest, with all these creatures flashing by. It reminds me of Elvenpath by Nightwish.
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 3:10 pm
Sylphs are wind elementals. They're said to inspire poets and storytellers. Thanks for the comment! biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:03 pm
i thought is great and i love creatures espically ones that ppl summon like the sylphs i think thats how u spell it but can we put other peotry here 2???
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:10 pm
No offense or anything, but I'd prefer not. . . If you want me to comment on a poem, I'll gladly check it out.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:13 am
ok cuz i thought i had a poem on this topic but since u don't want any other poems its ok i just can't find topics to relate too so its a little bit hard for me to get poems down in this guild. But i dont rhyme or anything i'm an emotion person so i put emotion in my peoms rathing then have them rhyme and i'm not very well but i enjoy it thats really the point of poetry write what u can and enjoy it... sorry talking to much again ~vanish~
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:58 am
You could post your poem as a new topic like i do. I'll be sure to check it out and comment. ^^
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 10:58 pm
oh so i can put in another poem just so u could use it as an inspiraition and use it as a new topic on it but it has to be about something in the woods right just making sure b4 i do....
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:42 am
I appreciate that. Thank u 4 asking. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:37 am
no problem i need to rewrite my poem a few times b4 i put it next to ur work its really good i put emotion but not enough rhyming none at all appearently
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:15 pm
This is honestly a well written/schemed poem. I'm probobly the worst poet in this guild, but I recognize good poetry when I see it. Bravo.
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:42 pm
im the worst poet in the guild XD
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 10:58 pm
Lol, I put up a pretty good fight for worst I believe. xD
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