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 Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:57 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:14 pm
Well I tend to do it to, I guess the main thing I do is not think about what I am writing until I am done writing it, then it just seems to be a bit better.
But still, I'm not a good writer so you might not want to listen to me...
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:33 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:53 pm
Hahah XD.
Your welcome, sorry I couldn't be of more help XP.
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:04 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 4:25 pm
Well, I'm not sure if I'm a good writer. I'll post a few of my works && I'll let you decide. If I'm any good, I'll see what I can do to help you. :]
I'll post them later. I don't wanna get up and go to my room to get my writing notebook.
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:17 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:04 pm
``Speak``
Don't worry...
I'll...get us out
I promise...
Can't breathe in no air
Cause there's none left, to breath in
This is not a way to live
I can't continue suffocating
But I ``hold note`` will make an effort
To break ``hold note`` through
*Chorus*
I will make it
Imma find an exit for me and you
This isn't over just yet
I will make it
Found the exit
But, it ain't budging
I ask for your help
Now, you're no longer breathing
But I ``hold note`` will make an effort
To break ``hold note`` through
*Chorus*
I will make it
Imma find an exit for me and you
This isn't over just yet
I will make it
Just hang on ``repeat``
I promise we'll be out soon
Don't leave me just yet
I'm telling you I need you ``hold note``
``Speak``
Hey...hey
It opened...
We're...I made it
I'm sorry if it sucks. I just typed it right now. :/ Again I was too lazy to get up and get my book. xD I hope you enjoy it still. I'll remind myself to get my book before I sit down in front of the computer. I don't promise you though. ><`Guess what? I went to the mall and bought that...piece of clothing. x] It's black! I also got a pair of flats. You better not steal this! :`D I will hunt you down. I swear I will. Later. <33
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 7:03 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:13 am
It's not my best since it was on the spot. I will get my composition notebook now....
-walks out the room,trips over the rug-
PAUSE
-returns with composition notebook-
Okay, let's see. I'm not sure if this one will be any better, but whatever. I'll give it a shot. That's the best I can do. Give it my best. :] I sound tacky, so I'll shut up && type. One more thing though. This isn't a poem or lyrics or anything. It's just writing. Nor is it a journal type of thing either.
You've bothered to look into my eyes expecting something more
But all you found was hurt && desire
Hurt from everything I didn't want to happen, but did
And desire for a new life && another chance
I refuse to lock myself with another
Only to be disappointed && hurt once again
Breaking down my fraguke self is no longer an option
I've no need if you, so be gone
I give you permission to skip this track && leave me untouched
I wish my works were better, but eh...what can I do, but write over && over again. =/ There's a little something, something in my about me as well. That's on my profile if you haven't read it already.
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:42 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 8:26 am
Well, I pretty much wait until I feel something that inspires myself to write orrrrrr I just find something important or worth writing about in my life && I write about it in lyric or poem form. Most of what I write is personal && about how I feel inside.
I see you're having trouble saving enough money for your quest. I think I could help you out a bit. Is 6k alright?
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 1:07 pm
I don't write down my songs and poems. I don't really like sharing my poetry for some reason, so it sits in the back of my head with all the other things getting cobwebs on them.
I have a bad habit of coming up with my poem and never writing it down.
I can try to come up with one, really fast.. off the top of my head.
In a bit though. D: My mother wants me off the computer.
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:42 pm
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