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 Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:57 am
The rules are as simple as the number zero. I should really be saying rule because the only rule you must follow is follow the rules in the Rules && More sticky. :]
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:51 am
They mouth words but cannot sing
They cause much pain and watch the sting
Sitting back and absorbing others' vulnerbility
By themselves, they ruin everything
You can write more than one per post just so you all know. ^^'
Take out my heart
Yeah, take out my heart
And may I bleed to death
Just let me be
For I can no longer take anymore of this
I'm drowning in fear and it hurts
So I wanna stop it as soon as possible
Now do what I tell you
And take out my heart
This is how I want it to be
I wanna totally free
Take out my heart
Yeah, take out my heart
And may I bleed to death
Just let me be
I hope you like these two. :]
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:11 pm
Ooh! I like your first one more.
First:8
Second:7
I'm going to make one off the top of my head.
Hmm.. It's a bit of a ghost melody though, hope you don't mind.
Your final tears shed
That saddened face, lined with pain
Your blood running that deep dark red
I could have sworn, I went insane
I know now what you tried to say to me
How you suffered for your sanity
And though they couldn't love you
But still your love was true
And you took your life
Like lovers always do,
Life goes on, fresh and new
With that silver blade, and your bloody rose
I'm falling down, without a fight
That rusty feeling that no one knows
And though no one knows I can't forget
The sweet memories of when we met
I need a little help tonight
I sit here alone, with an silent gaze
My eyes covered with an empty haze
Standing over your hidden grave
Something tells me this'll be a long night
Watching all the birds pass by
Staring at the empty sky
Watching the trees, the blood, the daffodils
A Winter breeze, with snowy chills
It's beyond all my sight
The light of what you tried to say to me
I didn't listen, I didn't know how
You were trying to set me free
Still you suffered for your sanity
And now I sing this rhapsody
For you, who suffered for your sanity
Wow. xD I didn't know I had it in me to write something like that this late at night. Longer than I had hoped, but oh well ;o
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