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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:39 pm


Ok well, I want to ask if there is any specific killing scene you like in your NOES stories at all? If so post them here ^^ I'd like to know! Im ever curious!.
Here are mine:

Angel then slightly feels someone brush or rather bump into her rudely as they walk by. She turns only to have the person say"Watch it!" Angel retorts"Oh ya Im sorry...Sorry for ebing in your..Obviously blind way..." Angel says aloud and then walks away saying"Lousy b***h.." The woman hears this and comes behind her.
Angel feels that girl grab her shold er saying"Hey! What did you call me!?" Angel stops and growls, saying under her breath"You could have least, said sorry or something..." She violently shrugs the womans hand away saying"You heard what I said...Less your deaf too.." Angel says again, angrily. The woman frowns and says rudely"Oh ya!? Turn around and say that!"
Angel frowns and turns to face the girl saying to her face"...You...heard...What...I...Said...Less...Your...Deaf...Too..." Angel grins"Did, I make to hard for you to understand.." Angel narrows her eyes at the girl. Angel then raises a brow, She blinks seeing the woman, was a bit inch shorter then her, she had blond long hair, With blue eyes, wearing a black over coat, and a black skirt on, With
black high heeled shoes, She had lipstick on of course. Angel looks at her"..you look formilliar...Very! Formilliar.." Angel takes a long look, trying to regain back her memory. She then goes wide eyed saying"Wait...It's coming back to me now..." Angel remembers when she was little and how this one teenage girl bumped into her and slapped her across the face when she was six, just for insulting
her. Angel snaps back saying"YOU!!!! I remember you now!!!!.." Angel starts to remember more and says"Ah ha!" The woman begisn to back up and Angel grabs her wrist forcingly and makes her face her as Angel says"...I remember you now...You were that girl, who bumped into me and made me fall..I was going to say sorry..But then you rudely had to acuse me..and even SLAP ME!" Angel growls
The woman blinks and says"What!? No I did't..!" Angel growls"Figures..I can't remember the good things at all..but when someone like this comes I remember.." Angel scuffs"s**t.." Angel holds her forehead then says"...I know who you are..." The woman looks at Angel in disturbance saying"No..You can't...!" Angel growls at this"..Your denice..I remember that name because you said it to me when you
rudely threw me to the ground.." Angel says and throws her to the side on the hard cement. Denice looks at her in horror, as Angel comes closer and says"Also..I remember..That I had you beat up pretty bad when I went and turned on you when i was six....." Angel narrows her eyes at her"I should have finished what I had started..." Angel walks towards her slowly now coming closer and closer
Denice tries to get up but can't as Angel steps on both of her hands, Denice yells in pain as it was a very violent stomp on her hands. Angel stands above her, Her eyes hallow and empty as she looks at the girl before her, saying"Do you enjoy this..." Denice struggles, trying to kick Angel but can't as Angel quickly grabs her by the throat and squizzes it hard and roughly slamming her
down again and again violently and angrily she does this, Not stopping until she finaly hears Denices head crack. Denice yells in pain and Angel lets her go, falling to the ground, Denice holds herself up by one hand, while the other holds half of her cracked skull. Angel looks at this without an emotion in her saying"..Well..I guess there is a brain in there after all..could have fooled me.."
Denice snaps to Angel quickly and says"You monster!!!!!" Angel fnarrows her eyes coldly"The only monster i see here is you..." Angel says to her and walks towards denice again. Denice tries to get up, Angel watches this saying"...why do you want to run away..you know your fait..Except it..." Angel says lowly and stomps on Denices back making her smakc down very hard on the cement.
Angel appears very cold now, as she looks at her on the ground begging for her to stop, Angel narrows her eyes in hatred"...You humans never stoped for me when I wanted it to end...Why should i for you" Angel's eyes flash red now as she then starts to sink her foot harder into denices back, With her cold and hallow expression never leaving her face. Her foot digs in more, Denices spine soon cracks
Angel hears this and grins, she then lifts her foot and lands it down hard on her back now, completely cracking it in her back, Denice lets out a loud scream as Angel says"...Scream all you want...Noone will save you.." Angel says lowly with no feeling in her voice at all, a rather hallow and unexpressive tone to her voice now as she watches denice suffer under her violent acts.
Angel watches as Denice cringes, She coughs up blood, as her brain pumps with blood, the blood from her head runs down the street. Angel looks at her and kneels down to her face saying"...Are we having fun yet..?" Angel says looking at denice. Denice coughs up more blood saying"..you..b***h...you..." Angel listens and growls
Angel listens as she stands up hearing denice say"...You won't get anything from me!.." Angel rolls her eyes as she violently steps on denices head now saying"What makes you so sure i WANT anything from the likes of you.." She says angrily. Angel looks to the side"..All I want is for you to suffer..Theres nothing wrong with that in my eyes..."
Angel continues"..I supoose i should just kill you now..But i whould'nt have any fun for me then.." Angel says and grins then frowns looking away"..But whats the point after it's all over..." Denice then yells out ending Angels silent treatment to herself"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME!??" Angel does'nt look at her saying"You must be very lonely to say that..." Denice blinks and tries to open her one
eye and looks at Angel some at the corner" Why do you say that!?" Angel closes her eyes and scuffs"..When your alone your heart becomes cold..It happends to everyone...Even me.." Angel starts to slowly move her foot down on denices head, Crushing it slowly saying"...It does'nt matter anymore anyway...I've gotten use to the lonelyness..everyone does sooner or later..."
Angel closes her eyes crushing denices head more as she yells in pain, trying to move but can't because of the loss of blood and the pain. Angel says"Besides...After your killed..what is there left for me.." Angel then crushes denices head completely, The head cracks as the skull of denices head pops out and blood splatters on Angels face some as she looks down now saying
"....To bad for you that I don't really give a ******** anymore.." Angel moves her foot off from the blood and narrows her eyes, seeing blood on her arms and legs a bit. Angel looks to the side saying"..Im not cleaning this mess up.." Angel slowly looks down and holds herself, she cringes at her own touch, her head hangs now in silence saying"..Why won't they go away.." She closes her eyes tightly now
Angel holds herself tightly, the wind blows more around her, she never opens her eyes as she says"...The images will never stop coming...They'll always be there...coming to me..haunting me...I don't even have a home..let alone anyone to talk to..But who whould talk to me about anything..." Angel says lowly now"..who whould ever understand.." Angel looks down still in silence.  
PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:52 pm


Here is another part:

Angel and luna walk out as Luna complains saying"Angel you could have killed her! What were you thinking!!!???" Angel retorts"relax she's alive ain't she?" Angel then stops and opens her eyes, Some kids stood infront of them as she
rolls her eyes at this saying"Come kiddies, I don't have all day, Now move for ANgel..Less you want to kicked away..." Angel says threateningly at them. Luna grabs onto Ange;'s arm and says"Angel..I think we should keep walking...Those are the REALLY mean looking kids that seemed to like bad things.." Angel raises a brow at her, then looks back at the kids and smirks"Hello..Children"
The two boys and girl look at Angel. One of the boys comes behind her and says to luna"Hey there, why are you hiding behind this chick huh?" He tries to grab luna but ANgel turns to face him saying as she grabs his chin"Watch it monkey boy...Touch luna..and I'll slice in half..Or better yet..Make a living roast out of you.." Angel says and lets go of his chin violently, Causing him to be thrown
down at her feet. The boy shook his head and got up as he glared at her"Hey! Do you know who we are!?" Angel thinks and looks at them"Let me guess..." She points to each one saying"Dumb, Dumbed, and dumer?" She says having a straight face on as she sneers. The other boy with the cap on his head frownd and went right up to her face"No!" Angel leans into his face saying"I was'nt asking you, your
names..I was TELLING you them.." She says and leans back up slowly, Her eyes grew tired as she says holding her head now"Listen, I don't wanna start anything, Im tired...and if I give into your little games now...Im gonna kill you all.." She says and shrugs"Because...I can" She says simply. The girl comes behind ANgel and grabs luna by the air, Luna yelps and Angel turns around saying"Luna!"
As ANgel walks towards the girl and growls, One of the guys jumps on Angel causing her to almost fall, The other boy jumps her too and Angel goes to the ground, She growls even more as they try to keep her there. Luna wonders why they are doing this and turns swiftly to the girl"Why are you doing this!!!??" the girl simply replies"You killed our friends, so ya we kill you" She sneers.
Angel growls more and shoves them both off of her, causing the boys to fly back and hit the girl, While the other smakcs into the wall violently. Angel growls at them all, and leers her eyes at them angrily as she says"Fine, i was'nt going to start anything, But apparently, you want to be killed!" The boy gets off of the girl and jumps at Angel again, Attempting the same thing, Angel sticks her
claws out and impales him on her arm, He slowly slides down, the blood going down ANgel's arm as she just narrows her eyes at him, watching the boy die slowly as his eyes are still opend, Slowly blood runs down his mouth and to his neck running all the way down. Angel throws her arm to the side letting the body slip off it easily, The boys lifeless body falls to the ground making the other
kids go back in fear. Angel moves behind them and says"Aw why so scared huh? Don't be, This can be fun for the whole family!" She says and smirks as she takes out a scyth. Luna hides her eyes and goes into the bushes behind the school watching in horror.
Angel looks at the scyth and grins as she says"Wow, I have'nt used this since I was....Hm..Around 8 I believe..On that..Foster dad..." She growls angrily and slams the scyth to the ground saying"Now..Whos' first??" She grins evily and the one boy runs away causing ANgel to watch him as she says"Aw! Chicken! Affraid of a little weapon!" She runs at him and moves the scyth to her right then slashes
his head off, She catches the head and looks at it as she holds it under her arm and watches the body fall to the ground. Angel holds the head of the boy and says"Alas poor yourck..I knew him well..." She flips the head up and whistles as she walks with it saying to the frightend girl as she falls to her knees backing up against the wall, the cold bricks brushing against her as Angel says"
To die..Or not to die..That! Is the question!" Luna watches this as Angel displays sick humour with this and frowns as she says"Why do i have the feeling I have seen this type of humour before..Angel has always had it but.." Luna thinks now as she hears Angel say"Now...Prepeare yourself, for the most blood curdling scream you have ever known!" Angel raises the scyth in the air and
slashes it down violently, hacking the girl one by one, blood going everywhere. Angel stops and twirls her weapon in the air landing it back to her sholder as she says with narrowed eyes"...Never was there a story of more whoe...Then that of this girl...and her romeos.." Angel grins with glee and simply walks away saying with a cherry voice"Man! that was my rush for the day luna! Whats yours??"
Luna comes out of the bushes with a shakened tone, She slowly walks to Angel saying"..Um well..what will be my rush is when we um..Go back.." She says to her. Angel looks at luna and grins"Ah ok! But the night is young luna, Come on lets have funnnn!!!" Luna sighs shaking her head"No..I promised resque I'd make him some bacon.." Angel frowns".....Your no fun..." Angel says and walks away with
her weapon in hand.  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:56 pm


Another part of it:

Angel sits there and waits, She feels someone do it again and she swiftly turns and then frowns. She lays her head down, and then from out of nowhere something throws a cup at ehr hitting her in the head, Angel tries to ignore this growling in rage, her anger rises but she keeps calm.
Angel tries to keep herself calm as best as she can for luna. Some of the kids laugh and it only reminds ANgel of her past, she covers her ears as she is human now in a disguise and growls some now. She listenst to them as they talk about her, Mean and horrible things about her. ANgel stays calm and as she about to relinquish her anger, another kid comes and hits ehr upside the head.
Angel feels this and goes wide eyed, she growls angrily, more and more in anger, something rises in her. A deep feeling of wanting to kill them all, Like when she was when she was little. Angel lets her hair cover her face as she slowly and steadily raises herself up. Bijou looks around for the foosteps knowing that they are behind her as she turns around.
ANgel slowly makes her way up, She stops without turning
around or anything, She stands there. Tall and creepy, While she makes no sound no movement. She just stands there, The kids some how get creeped out by this wondering what she will do. Angel feels one of the kids touch her on the sholder and she listens as the kid says"Hey! Sit down!" The one kid laughs in the background"Ya! So we can throw things at you again!" he laughs.
Angel growls at this simply and without the kids reaction she slashes right through his stomach. The kids all in the cafe go very wide eyed at this, They stare as one of there own falls limbly on her hand. Angel's hair still covers her face, But through her hair, her eyes were red, very blood red. She had snapped.
Angel growls under her breath in rage, They had made her pissed. She slowly just throws the boy to the side and walks to the kids, slowly and steadily, As she makes her way towards the kids, They all get up and try to head out of the cafe. Angel turns her head and the doors all close shut and lock on them, She raises her hand and the some of the kids set on fire, burning them to death. Angel
watches this with no emotion at her, her eyes still red, she had been fully devoured into the kills. The kids all run away and scream, Luna hears the screams and gets up, She gasps seeing ANgel there and killing them all one by one not ever stopping at all. Angel lunges at both and tears them to shreds with her claws cutting and slashing them to death, She looks at other ones and sends them flying
into the wiring of the lights, making them all get shocked and blown up from the impact. Luna falls back in horror and goes wide eyed, She watches as Angel grabs other kids and stomps on them to death growling in rage now, She watches as Angel hacks, cuts slashes and kills them all. Luna slowly gets up and walks to ANgel slowy, Outstetching one arm as she says"An..Angel...It..It's me...L...Luna.."
Bijou moves away more and gulps as she backs up even more, the fear controls her as she backs up into a tree and says"Um...hehe..I can see your mad about..something.."She says and gulps even more now. Luna sees that Angel stands there panting and grolwing to herself, She stands there blood dripping all over her, Her eyes still red with hate and Luna slowly makes her way saying"Angel..I..I..."
Luna slowly makes her way but then stops and gasps as ANgel turns her head to her and growls in rage, Angel's eyes were slits while they were red, Her claws dripping with so much blood that you could'nt tell what was apart of her or not. Luna makes her way forward again towards her and says"Angel..It's..It's me...L...Luna..." Luna watches as ANgel backs away from her while she comes closer
to her. Luna goes closer to Angel and comes face to face with her, She looks at ANgel sadly with teary eyes and grabs Angel hugging her tightly. ANgel struggles and growls some but Luna says"Angel...Please...Please..stop...please...your scaring me..." ANgel hears lunas words, slowly her demonic form goes away, Her urge to kill slowly goes away. Luna cries in Angels arms.  
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