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darkrose29

PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:23 pm


To whom it concerns:
I grew up alone,
Never quite getting
Just the right tone.

To whom it concerns:
My family is gone.
Spread across the world,
My family is one.

To whom it concerns:
I fell in love with a friend
But his choice to cheat
Brought an untimely end.

To whom it concerns:
I love him still
And probably
I always will.

To whom it concerns:
People think I'm smart-
But what's the use of brains
When you have a broken heart.

To whom it concerns:
I'm still just a kid,
So please don't ask me
Why I did what I did.

To whom it concerns:
I really do try,
But sometimes I have to
Just sit down and cry.

To whom it concerns:
I've had a tough time-
Sometimes I feel like dieing,
Though I'm in my prime.

To whom it concerns:
Why do people lie?
And why do the ones I love
Either leave or die?

To whom it concerns:
I act like a tomboy,
But I'm still a girl.
Don't treat me like I'm some toy.

To whom it concerns:
I try to be strong-
But sometimes a hug
Is where I belong.

To who it concerns:
People tease me in the hall.
I know I'm not perfect,
But they make me feel small.

To whom it concerns:
I just need a friend-
Someone who'll be there
Till the end.

To whom it concerns:
Just one thing to say-
Did he ever love me,
Or was it a play?

I've never felt loved,
And it really burns.
Just thought I'd mention it
To whom it concerns.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 1:32 pm


Wow... *speechless*

LunarHybrid
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darkrose29

PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 1:56 pm


thanx! i really love this poem so other people enjoying means a lot.
PostPosted: Fri May 23, 2008 9:19 pm


Wow. . .Good use of repitition.

sistersan


Davis Shadenhand
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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 10:37 pm


Would it upset you if I made a rendition of this poem? I'd really like to give it a shot, but I don't want credit for stealing your poem.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 1:56 pm


thank you...and no, i would not mind the highest form of flattery is copying...so long as there is permission first...thank you so much for asking!!!

darkrose29


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2008 7:17 pm


I've heard something similar to this on TV once....that show Rosann or whatever it is...but I like yours wayyy better...would you mind if I tried my own version as well?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 11:53 am


have at it

i dont think i watched that show...this was an english assignment

darkrose29

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