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Poetry is what gets lost in translation ~Robert Frost~

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Dreams

darkrose29

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Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:08 am

"Dreamer's don't have

Common sense,"

Is what my mother

Said to me.

"So it doesn't make any sesnse

That you should have a dream."

But dreams are

What you live by,

Keeping you alive

Day by day,

And if you don't

Have a dream

You will never

Find a way.

Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:37 am

I like your style of writing. Its poetic, yet at the same time its like a story. And each poem always has a greater meaning behind it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Fluffy Pankakes

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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:45 am

I love it! it's short and to the point. (not that I don't like long poems, lol I write a lot of long poems ^^) and it's so true. it's a very beautiful poem and I can't wait to see more poems by you! you are a wonderful poet.