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Slack Water


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:58 pm


So.. uh... im kinda new here.
Well actually Ive been a member of the guild for a while... just havent posted anything yet.

so.. hey hows it going?

i guess ill post some better intro thing in the into thread biggrin


anyways, im just asking for critique on a commission....
and since its for a friend, i actully care if it looks good.


i cant pick out anything that i really dont like,
but generally i finish everything, then realize something is totally crap.


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:23 pm


The left (her right) shoulder looks kinda off.
It looks a tad too far from her neck.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:30 pm


It's not a flaw per se but the feel of the image may have been stronger if her back were a little more arched. She almost looks like she's on the razor edge of falling forward.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:03 pm


ah!

thanks for the suggestions 3nodding


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