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 Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:14 pm
Just to die would be a bliss
I cannot take much more of this
Licks and Kisses from the sweetest blade
Bury me in the darkest glade
Forget me there, just let me rot
Do not mark me, forget the spot
Seal me in with tar and tack
Don't say the words to bring me back
But etch MY words inside your head
I'm happy now that I am dead
Not very good, I know. In fact, it is the worst poem I have wrote in a while.
I wrote this after finding out my ex-fiance cheated on me.
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:24 pm
Oh, but I like it. It's actually really good, especially compared to some of the stuff I write. It's always kind of... Jumbled and misunderstood. >.< Still, you've got some talent. Normally I don't write when I'm depressed. neutral
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 4:43 am
I've always though that was a pretty one of yours(read of few in your journal). Wouldn't say my favorite of what you have written, but up there^^
I have difficulty writing without emotion, I have to get a pen instead of calming down, its my only way.
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