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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:30 am
This would be my fist collaborated work, as in using other writer idea and him using mine in order to work for a single goal. I plan it to be a test of my ability to work in group and I way to teach myself how to mature be taking others ideas. So with no further ado I ask if there is anyone who like to join me.
I wrote the begging of ScarY MonsterS like most of my other stories, with moral that society sees as wrong. The main character been a-would-be knight name Radahs from a foreign country, who can’t integrate himself with the other knight for his lack proper English and his strange costume. Radahs is a polygamist marry to a young ex-oracle Alanda and a shield maiden Stelia. While trying one day observes a cult placing lighting rods in a swamp, once finish the lighting strike the rods burning the swap to nothing and summing a man from our world into his. However there is something odd about the man...
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:10 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:21 pm
I'll write anything with you, cheif. Though, and I don't mean to sound harsh, your english grammar could use some work - a lot of work. If it's alright to ask, do you read english books often? Because reading is usually the best way to improve your grammar. Renton Noah This would be my fist collaborated work, as in using other writer idea and him using mine in order to work for a single goal. I plan it to be a test of my ability to work in group and I way to teach myself how to mature be taking others ideas. So with no further ado I ask if there is anyone who like to join me. I wrote the begging of ScarY MonsterS like most of my other stories, with moral that society sees as wrong. The main character been a-would-be knight name Radahs from a foreign country, who can’t integrate himself with the other knight for his lack proper English and his strange costume. Radahs is a polygamist marry to a young ex-oracle Alanda and a shield maiden Stelia. While trying one day observes a cult placing lighting rods in a swamp, once finish the lighting strike the rods burning the swap to nothing and summing a man from our world into his. However there is something odd about the man...
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:36 pm
NovaKing I'll write anything with you, cheif. Though, and I don't mean to sound harsh, your english grammar could use some work - a lot of work. If it's alright to ask, do you read english books often? Because reading is usually the best way to improve your grammar. Renton Noah This would be my fist collaborated work, as in using other writer idea and him using mine in order to work for a single goal. I plan it to be a test of my ability to work in group and I way to teach myself how to mature be taking others ideas. So with no further ado I ask if there is anyone who like to join me. I wrote the begging of ScarY MonsterS like most of my other stories, with moral that society sees as wrong. The main character been a-would-be knight name Radahs from a foreign country, who can’t integrate himself with the other knight for his lack proper English and his strange costume. Radahs is a polygamist marry to a young ex-oracle Alanda and a shield maiden Stelia. While trying one day observes a cult placing lighting rods in a swamp, once finish the lighting strike the rods burning the swap to nothing and summing a man from our world into his. However there is something odd about the man... Oh no is fine, to ask that. I actually do, I’m just self-thought English speaker. All my English comes from watching TV, music and books. No school and no teacher.
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