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VikkiLostGuin

PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:26 pm


The Sound of Running Water

Little red blood drops
Blush on my fingertips
Dizziness follows
in close procession.
The sound of running water
Splashing on the tiles
echoing off the walls
and sky high ceiling
The spinning room
and then thud and pain.
Waking up and soaking
puddles of red stained water
Close your eyes
Allow yourself to drift away.
Silence ensues.



If you read it please let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Vikki
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:03 pm


I'm not exactly sure what' happening, but I'm sure it's not good, and yes, very morbid.

Calopterynx


VikkiLostGuin

PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:04 pm


Don't worry. I'm fine.
This was written a year ago when things were really rough; I found it and edited it.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:39 pm


that's good, and it's well written.

Calopterynx


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:42 pm


I like everything except for 'silence ensues', I think it's be great with just 'silence', to illustrate your point.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:25 pm


i didn't find it morbid
though people say i am morbid myself

you did a fine job by the way
i love it.

Riosuu


VikkiLostGuin

PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:42 am


Thanks.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:17 pm


it was really good, lot's of inspiration coming from it!
Thank you for posting this! heart

Yuuki Aoyagi

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