The risk taker extremest
(you should get a d for not using your right name and you didn't attempt, just saying.)
Gets away from Jed(James) before he could stomp on me,(Jeff).
(I'm glad you noticed that, but your part wrong. Right about the name, but wrong about the attempt. You can use words that have the same meanings as attempt...Such as Went. Went is another word that mean tries. And tries is another word for Attempt.)
James looked at him and then the ref. James was looking confused. The crowd began to boo.
(Also. I'm not the guy that needs the grades, you do.)