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Mystical Hitara

Springtime Businessman

PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:56 am


Rave and Rock all mixed into one.

http://profile.imeem.com/BiO2V9V/music/ipOlqKfU/dj_andy_rocking_and_raving/

Here's how my chart works.

1 being worst.
3 for being moderate.
5 being epic.

Also, I am looking for creative cricism.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:49 pm


Actually, the audio levels sounded a little uneven to me, but I guess that could be my headphones. i like the genre-blurring, and the loops were catchy. The transitions were mostly flawless. A bit simple in parts, like the guitar part just being a solo. If you're going to mix Rave and Rock, do it in a way that they sound good being played at the same time. It sounds like a few things i've done in Sony Acid. Strive for clarity always, but without becoming boring. I don't really believe in number ratings, but I would give it a 3.7.

freshyjazz


Mystical Hitara

Springtime Businessman

PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 4:21 pm


Yeah... I know what you mean. It sounded kinda odd once I put it into mp3 format. Im gonna go back into garageband and make sure everything is right.

I'll figgure this out.

Thanks for you feedback!

I really appreciate it.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:40 pm


I had no sound problems with it, might be because my subwoofa picks up the base a bit more.

I quite liked it, I thought it was very good. I have a friend who is a dance teacher, every year she gets her school and enters an enormous competition throughout Australia, this year the theme is 'breaking out of whats expected.'

I was wondering if i could show your song to her, some bits of it sound quite good and might be able to fit with something in there biggrin

mdwallin


Mystical Hitara

Springtime Businessman

PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:53 pm


Yeah man, I am more than okay with that.

If she wants more songs, have her email me at: dj_andyzacharek@yahoo.com
PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:39 am


hah!

she is wondering about prices, I'll give her your email and she should get back to you soon biggrin

mdwallin


`Roguey
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:07 am


Hey! A music host that will allow for non users to hear more then 30 seconds of a piece. Awesome.
Well i do like the piece, but i do think it jumps from genre to genre a bit too harshly. You could try to keep a few instruments from previous section in the next section to give it a bit more flow. Or you could just dampen (decrescendo) the sound when a new section comes up. Orr have a more universal, or relatively static beat.
Just putting some ideas out there for you, it's up to you whether you want to take them up. :]
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:50 pm


it sounds too sampled for my taste, I cannot hear any specific melodies, which is what makes me enjoy music, I like some techno and rave but i have to hear a solid consistent melody or it's just a no go for me.

Satrevi

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