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ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:32 am


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well yea his legs are really wonky and i don't know why
well the whole thing is wonky, but the leggs bother me in particular :<
redlines and critiques please?
thank you very much :]
i think some of it might have to do with the fact that his pants are riding reallllly low,
but i'm not sure
and yes his head is too big , sorry D]
PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:15 pm


Ooh. Clothing designs look really good.

Before I have a shot at red-lining, could you briefly draw or describe what his surroundings are?

I'm not quite what he's sitting on and leaning on.

Cloverella
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ilovegrape

PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 7:25 am


a bench : D
[sorry, i have a bad habit of no including backgrounds D: ]
PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 1:08 am


i decided to change it up cause i couldnt make it "feel right"


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:0 though, my shoe is entirely off and fails xd

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