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 Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:24 am
Hey everyone! This thread is for those who like writing and want to show their work off, like me. hehe j/k This thread is also made for CpainsorVio7. She wanted to post her work somewhere so it's going to be here. ^__^ Hope you like Spence!
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:26 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:28 am
OMG I didn't see this till just now gonk I'm really tired right now, but I PROMISE tomorrow I'll get out my poetry bible, and start retyping them to share with everyone ^_^. PROMISE!
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:32 am
If I post my poetry, everyone will run screaming from this guild. gonk I shall observe instead.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:34 am
Meh...I'm bored...and I wrote this like a year ago...I'm sure a few of you have seen it already...
Running has my little playfull friend been?
xxUnder what bright stars that life can behold.
Bounded, by the letters that you have sent,
xxYearning to love and wanting to be told.
If I had the choice to go or to stay,
xxLonger would I stay than life offers thee,
Only until the darkness of dusk sways,
xxValued like a emerald that one can't see.
Every day I look forward to right now.
xxYour fire envelopes all around it.
Only now order be broken on prow.
xxUnison that once joined causes forfiet.
Rapidly the sun hath set, on this day.
Sorry may not heal the vows that you say.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:37 am
Love is like dominos, one wrong move and everything you have worked for falls apart.
I dropped a tear in the ocean, the day i find it is the day i'll stop loving you
Too often we loose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 mucles to frown BUT it only takes 4 mucles to b***h-slap that little ******** upside the head...
If I could be anything I would be your tear, so I could be born in your eye, live down your cheek and die on your lips
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:40 am
-ive died to many times to count ive lost my shield and my nite. ive lost my love and my site. ive been blinded to many times and now i just cant see it felt pretty good noing you were with me. that feeling has faded away and never can be foung but thats ok ill just die and again but this time ill be 6 ft under ground
-why do you turn one me? dont you noe that i feel pain? i have felings like you have love. like you have life. but yur too blinded by greed to see that the way you act hurts others more then it hurts you.
im dead. not literally,but i might as well be. no one has the time to stop to help me. they are too busy wit their so called fast paced life. but i finnaly found one who can help me up. my life is now complete
-love is hard and complicated. when will this pain end. the tormenting cycle of love that can not be. the definition of this torment is you and me
-we see our life past by our eyes. we want it to stop but it wont and cant. how can we stop it. we contemplate and think but nuthing comes up. by the time the answer has come we are lying in in a lot of land underground
-we see the light at the end of the tunnel waiting for us to get closer. but when we have finnaly reached it, will we go in? will we go in or will we hesitate and fall back into the crowd?
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:43 am
-come into my dreams. it will always be onli you and me. let me tell you wat i need. youll always be in my dreams
-ive been stung by a bee. or at least it feels like it. im slowly dying. why did you have to turn your back on me? are you that evil? can i ever trust another soul? even though you are out of my life, you shall forever be my burden
-i am forever fallin. never getting up. you came into my life and i stopped falli i had finally found a grip. i though the grip was srtong enough to last forever but as time passed by the grip began to losen and i am left falling yet again. no one can help me up or give me a grip. never again can i reach out to put my hand out to a grip in reality. but when will i stop falli? never is wat i believe and so far its become true
-is this feeling ever gonna stop will the pain not go away? can you answer my questions? or am i just some body floating in this world upside down?
-i walk down the street and everyone stares. are they looks of love or ones of hate? i feel their eyes pierce throug me. when will this pain stop. just stop staring at me. im not somne freak show. or is dat just wat i believe?
-we think the ones we love will always be there for us. but wat happens when they also turn their backs on you? the feeling is onli felt by some and i am part of that some. actually i feel like i make up the some who are hurt. why do the ones i love decide to turn on me? this answer can never be found.
-i've seen you b4. in my dreams. you are the one who is always by my side. the one who protects me when im in need of it. you are the one who catches me when i fall. but you need a name. and i have finally found one. the perfect name. you are my knight in shining armor. my fairytale has finally come true. and thats all becuz ive finally found you.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:45 am
Lost Dreams
I lay upon the velour sheets,
Your satin touch,
of Godly hands
caress my breasts,
and breath heaven
into me.
You whisper all my
deepest lies
but it's eternally hidden
in this passion chamber
and my tears
soak into the pillow
as you grip onto me.
I make my loving useless.
Since it's all a dream.
My weary fantasy.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:45 am
-i look in the mirror i see a face unreconized. who is dat? i dont want to call out to it but i do anyways. "hello? who are you" i wait for a reply and i finally see dat the one in the mirror is me. just without the comments frm others
-you are the one ive finally decide. you are the onli one who could understand me threw my hard times. you are the one
-im tired of hearing your lies, seeing your scams, watching you hurt me. but why cant i stop you? why cant i just stop the pain that is inficted on me? the answer is that i dont noe how.
-when you see yurself you see wat others think of you,never wat you think of yourself. and no matter how much you want to see yurself you never show up.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:47 am
ok im sorry about the grammar. mine isnt that good and sorry for all the mistakes. they are all works in progress. srry if its hard to read....im not very godd at these poem writings anyway sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:47 am
This isn't poetry as much as it's abstract thinking, but I like it anyhow. Makes me giggle and think at the same time, and trust me, that's a task.
Pockets With Holes
its all so vague
vague and watery
the obscure random memories of people I only just met
and others I've known for an eternity
its stupid
stupid is a stupid word
I don't really know why I should feel guilty
as though I am taking something that belongs to someone else
but fits so well in my pocket
and wants to be there
asks to be there
begs to stay there
and I want it to be mine
is it?
or does it belong to someone else?
am I the cause of this one's emptiness?
well ******** guess we'll see.
but I want it just to belong to me.
just like that.
maybe I am an object that belongs in someone else's pocket
or on someone's key chain
and that person misses me
but I am in THIS pocket. and it ******** suits me.
choices.
and so on and so forth.
I don't know...
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:49 am
Dear God,
& It hurts like ******** knives through
my back to see all the reality I've
attained is just another disimulative
mask worn by Life
& It's like twelve inch nails straight
through caring eyes to know that
all I've done is completely lost
to a higher man that is punished for
who he is, like it's wrong of him.
& It's moral decay in her finest most
fluid form when I know all faith's
gone black
& it's that I know I'm ******** up when
all my bittered relations lay cozy
and warm in their respective bedrooms
bettering themselves with the dreadful
things they whisper and I am trapped
outside in the cold midnight rain
confessing myself to sleep
& It's like all the times I've ever
been sorry is as painless as the denial
oriented youth that stuffs themselves
with Zoloft for a midnight snack swearing
it'll hide the wounds
& It's life like I've had a family's love
chiseled into my meaty forearms just like
my hinged better half
& It's the chaotic, irrational, prejudice
molesting monster in me has been unleashed
to devour thoughts of conservatism and
tradition
& it stings all over she could never love me
enough to be immortalized any more so in
my morbid thoughts
& It was all the times I was fueled by fervent
existence that was just another ill will and
scattered plan
& It stood for nothing beyond all the times I've
held a weightless ruger to my head calling for
a muse or a savoir
& It's a dedication to the thousands of times I've
slept dead and cried because no sunlight shines
through my window at dawns wake
& It made explanation for all the reasons why I had
to sit helpless crouched beneath deceptions cloud
and rip my hair out scalp blood and all
& It was all the hell I've seen in the last six
wasted years of my life when I'd find love in all the
wrong places and trust in all the wrong faces,
justified
& It was this memoir that made me see I have
nothing left beyond deluded memories devoid of
words, faith and breath
& It once made my world turn but now I see It
was never really in me
This belief is dead.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:50 am
To You Forever
Words cannot describe my love for you
Actions only last for a few
Moments of sensuality
Before residing only in your memory.
Photographs wear out and Fade
Roses are typical and slightly mundane
A kiss lasts only so long
So here I am writing this song.
It isn't clever or terribly supreme
I'm simply spinning the things of a dream
And when you hear it you'll probably laugh
The sound will echo and break me in half.
But if you have the heart to know
Exactly how hard it is to show
The feelings I have for you only
Maybe I won't always be so lonely.
So now I leave you with this
A hug, a rose, a song, a kiss
Remember my words I have tried to say
To you forever, starting today.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 12:50 am
CpainsorVio7 Lost DreamsI lay upon the velour sheets, Your satin touch, of Godly hands caress my breasts, and breath heaven into me. You whisper all my deepest lies but it's eternally hidden in this passion chamber and my tears soak into the pillow as you grip onto me. I make my loving useless. Since it's all a dream. My weary fantasy. breast? O.O
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