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shadowdragon3141
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:48 pm


my favorite short story i've written, and one of the few that is actually finished. i made it sometime in the summer for a writing contest but i wasn't allowed to submit it in the end cuz it was only supposed to be 2 pages double spaced. its 8. *sigh*
PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:51 pm


Into the Darkness
“C’mon, you can hit harder than that!” Your friend laughs, a gleaming sword hanging from his calloused hand. Two of your own swords hang from your sweat-covered palms, your thumbs resting on your knees as you pant heavily on the ground. You pull yourself up, a slight grin sliding up the side of your face. Swiftly you bring up your swords so that they form an “x” in front of your eyes. You run at your friend with a yell, swinging your whole body around while you attack, as if it were made of rubber.
The clash of metal on metal is all you hear in the practice yard of your friend’s large manor. You are blinded from anything but this battle; you no longer feel the pain when your friend strikes you time and time again. It is getting late, the sun dipping low beneath the sky as it sets fire to the horizon. You don’t notice, though. You are determined to win this match; your friend has won too many times for you to ignore it anymore.
I have two swords and he only one, yet I am the one always losing, you think bitterly to yourself. Your body now moves of its own accord-blocking and striking, dodging and lunging, the connection between your body and mind long since severed. This battle seems to go on for hours when only minutes, minutes when only seconds. You get a sudden rush of energy as you see your friend step out of line just enough to give you an opening. Taking this miracle opportunity you lunge for your friend.
You stop just as your closest blade is kissing the underside of your friend’s neck. You can move only your eyes and nothing else. You know that some sort of force is holding you back, since the position you are frozen in cannot balance on its own. Your head is aligned with your left shoulder and your mouth is set in a grimace. Your eyes strain as they look downward and they widen slightly. Your feet are still a few feet off the ground from when you leapt at your friend. Your right arm is the one that prepares the finishing blow, while your left is swung behind your contorting back, the tip of your blade appearing beside your thigh.
Your eyes move back to look at your friend, frozen in surprise. His hands are closed around his sword, preparing for a blow that would never come; on his face a small smile that would never finish growing. You see, with a panicked feeling, that his eyes are wide and pleading as they look at something beyond you.

shadowdragon3141
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shadowdragon3141
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:52 pm


“So this is what I’m after, a kid?” A man in dark clothing appears, walking beside you. Your friend’s eyes follow him as he stops. He turns his head so his dark eyes meet yours, and, looking you over quickly, he laughs. He wears black gloves that conceal spidery fingers and leather boots hide his feet. On his waist a sheath rests, you can see that surrounding the blade of the sword hidden inside is of a black fire of sorts. A black cloak covers his body, the hood pulled back to show his face. His short hair is a silvery gray, long bangs swept over his face to cover one of his dark green eyes. Though his hair suggests he is old, you have the feeling, just by looking at his impassive face, that he can’t be any older than 25 at the most. He stretches his hand out towards you.
“You’re intelligent, aren’t you?” he asks. “So speak!” He flicks his fingers and you feel your mouth loosen. Suddenly you feel an endless wave of questions pouring out of your mouth.
“Who are you? How did you get here? Why…” You hear a loud smack and your cheek burns as the man strikes you with the back of his gloved hand.
“I said ‘speak’, you idiot! Not ‘interrogate!’” he demands, his eyes set in a hard glare. You feel beads of sweat trickle down your cheek, your heart heavy with fear. Then, surprisingly, the man’s eyes soften and his face, though hard to read now, almost looks thoughtful.
“If I gave you your movement back, would you promise to behave? I’d hate to have something happen to that friend of yours.” He flicks his fingers again and you collapse onto the ground. Growling with anger you push yourself up with your swords and lunge at your opponent. You hear him mutter, “Fool” and you find your swords being pulled right from your hands.
“What did…” you start to say. The man looks at your swords he now holds by the blades, and then tosses them onto the ground, causing you to flinch. What makes it worse is that the man’s gloves don’t show the slightest sign of a scratch, even though the blades are sharp.
“Where you’re going, you won’t need these. Just how old do you think you are, anyways?” he looks from where your swords now lay then back to meet your horrified gaze. You look at him finding only one thing to say.
“I’m seventeen.” You gasp as he strikes you again.
“That was a rhetorical question! I didn’t mean for you to answer it!” He turns his head and stretches his arm out parallel with his gaze. Tendrils of darkness twist and turn about on the ground and then reach up to the sky. A cocoon of black fire forms from the darkness as the man’s fingers close around your arm in a vice-like grip.
“Time to go,” he mutters. You struggle to yank your arm away, demanding to know who this man is and what he wants. He sighs and stops walking, but the force of his grip stays the same.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:53 pm


“I suppose you have the right to know.” He looks at you with his unreadable face, and you feel needles crawl up your back. “I was born of the darkness and into darkness. I live in a world separate from yours, but that portal I have made allows passage into it. I am what you might call a Soulseeker, meaning I have no soul of my own but am willing to search all over for a specific one. Without a soul, I cannot truly live. Though I can feel things such as anger and despair, my happiness always has to come at another’s expense. Every day I feel something missing deep inside of me. An ache I can never get rid of. An ache that continuously grows, clawing at my inside. My friend is the same.
“That is why we have been searching for someone. Someone with a soul pure and strong enough for the both of us. A soul that has everything we could have wanted and more.” The man takes the hand not holding onto you and brings it to your chest, closing his eyes. His hand glows for a moment, and then he removes it. “You have that soul,” he says quietly. An eerie silence falls over the both of you, and, with fear steadily filling your heart, you ask him once again who he is.
“Merxael.” He replies, meeting your gaze. The sheer terror brought on from these events suddenly brings you the urge to laugh.
“Merxael?!” you cry. “What kind of a name is that?” your free hand slaps to your mouth, cursing your devilish tongue. Merxael’s hand curls into a fist, and his grip on you
becomes tighter.
“It is the name I chose for myself. It is the name everyone calls me by.” Confusion and fear swirl about in your chest as you think about his words.
“You chose?” you ask. “What do you mean by that? Don’t you have parents who named you?”
“I told you I was born of the darkness. Soulseekers don’t have parents. When we are first created, we are darkness itself. At that time we have a choice to take the form of a person, or just to stay as part of the surrounding black. I chose to be a man in my early twenties with the name of Merxael. These clothes you see here on me were what I found myself wearing when I took this form. I cannot change these, but I was given the chance to add a scarf or other article of clothing if I wished. I chose not to.” He starts to pull you again, towards the dark portal. Finding new strength you wrench your arm from his grip.
“No!” you cry. Merxael tilts his head. “I’m not letting you take my soul just so you and some other…thing, can live. If you do, what will that leave me?” You shake your head, feeling tears slide down your cheek, though you don’t know why.
“Fine then.” Merxael shrugs his shoulders. “When you decide to change your mind, let me know. I’ll be waiting.” He walks over to your friend and, in a swift fluid motion, unfreezes him and throws his fist into your friend’s stomach. He grabs his arm and pulls him towards the darkness. You shout at him in protest, but he ignores you.
Grabbing your swords off the ground, you run at Merxael just as he is disappearing into the swirling blackness. You swing your sword at his back and hear him gasp as beads of black-red blood spray onto your hand, and then he is gone. You quickly follow him into the portal, into the darkness.

shadowdragon3141
Vice Captain


shadowdragon3141
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:54 pm


You find yourself in a world of complete black. Looking at your hands, you discover, with surprise, that you can see them as if they were in broad daylight. You guess that in this world, the people give off their own light. But what kind of people are they? You shudder as that thought enters your mind.
Falling to your knees, you let tears slide freely down your face. Long ago, when you were still a small child, a plague had swept through the city, wiping out a third of the population. Your friend and his family had survived, but you are all that’s left of your own. Your friend took you under his wing, allowing you to live with his family until you become old enough to care for yourself. But that is all lost now that your friend is gone.
Your hands ball into fists around the cool hilts of your swords. You know what you are going to do. Getting to your feet, you take your first few steps forward. Your pace quickens as your confidence grows. You are going to find Merxael. You are going to find your friend.
The darkness is unending, threatening to collapse on your every step. But you don’t care. All that matters is finding your friend, and bringing him back safe. You hear a rustling sound, and whip your head back only to see more of the choking black. You keep a firmer grip on your swords and keep walking, though fear begins to hold its icy grip around your chest. You hear the sound again and then you cry out, pain shooting through your shoulder. You look over and see a small shadow no bigger than your fist that only vaguely resembles a rat of some kind, biting into your shoulder. More of these come from the darkness, leaping onto you as if you were a feast. You try to swipe at them with your swords but your blades merely passe right through them.
Just as you start to feel that this is the end, you hear a sound like a person waving a flaming stick. The shadows fall off you and disappear into the darkness, and you collapse onto your knees. A gloved hand is held out in front of you and you turn to face your savior. You gasp, falling back on your hands. Shoulders down, the man looks exactly like Merxael; the black-fire sword he sheathes also identical to the one belonging to the Soulseeker. You relax slightly as you look upon the man’s face, definately not Merxael's. His hair is a vibrant blonde, standing up in places all over his head. The lower portion of his face is concealed in a thick black scarf that wraps around his head, disappearing beneath his collar. He looks at you with light grey eyes as you take his outstretched hand. You mutter a thanks and get to your feet.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:55 pm


“Why are you here?” he asks you, his voice muffled from the scarf. You take a breath to try to calm your nerves.
“I’m looking for someone.” you reply simply. You don’t feel comfortable talking in this place; the thought of those rat-like things makes you uncomfortable. The man nods his head, thinking.
“I’m looking for someone as well. But I know this place better than you do, so if you’re looking here, you’re going to need someone who knows this place-someone who lives here, for example.” You nod to him and together you head off in a new direction, neither of you finding reason to talk any longer. You don’t want to look at his face, either. Somehow the scarf he wears makes you feel cold.
The walk seems to go on for an eternity. Occasionally the rats appear again but every time your partner destroys them you feel more and more pathetic. Soon you’ve had enough. You hold out your arm, stopping the man beside you. Throwing your head up into the dark, you shout.
“Merxael! Show yourself!” Your companion turns to stare at you with curious eyes. He is about to say something, but is then stopped.
“I see you’ve found him, Lark.” Merxael appears from seemingly nowhere, and stands before you. The man you now know as Lark walks over to join Merxael, folding his arms over his chest. A sharp pain fills inside you as you realize Lark is the friend Merxael had told you about. He too, is a Soulseeker.
“Where is my friend?” you demand. Merxael snickers, and then motions to Lark. The blonde man snaps his fingers and your unconscious friend appears, his arm in Lark’s grasp.
“I take it that means you’ll give up your soul for him?” Merxael looks at your friend with a grin. You grit your teeth and your hands become tight fists, but you nod.
“If I give you my soul, then you will return him to his home unharmed?” The faces of the Soulseekers become serious and they both nod. As the last tears you will ever shed fall from your face, you shut your eyes and stretch out your arms. “Then take it.”
Lark and Merxael join shoulder-to-shoulder and raise one arm each, so that their end fingers are touching. A black mist encases their outstretched hands an even darker shadow shoots from the mist, the ends forming into claws. It dives into your chest and you feel a searing pain fill deep inside of you. The scream that flies from your mouth echoes through your mind, fading along with your consciousness.
* * *
You wake up alone with an empty feeling deep inside of you. You get up, finding yourself wearing clothes like Merxael’s. Your two swords still rest in their sheaths, only black fire surrounds the blades.
You see a small square opening in the ground of this eternal darkness, and walk over to it. You see Lark and Merxael, tears of joy streaming down their faces while Lark’s tears soak the edge of his scarf. They are whole now. Not far from them your friend sits at the base of a tree, tears also falling down his face, though these tears are of sorrow. Lark seems to notice this and nudges Merxael and they walk over to your friend, who starts to shout at them and unsheathes his sword. Merxael and Lark also unsheathe their darkswords, bringing them to your friend’s throat. Merxael says something and your friend glowers, though his sword falls to the ground. The light fades and you are once again alone.
You have no soul now. How do you feel?

shadowdragon3141
Vice Captain


Nia Sephora
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:36 am


Any specific reason its in second person?
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:53 pm


No, that's just how it turned out when I wrote it. When I write stories, I never actually decide what tense it will be- its all in how it appears in my head. This one just happened to appear in second person.

shadowdragon3141
Vice Captain


Nia Sephora
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 6:46 pm


Cool! I like that. And your story rocks!
I love Merxael!
PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 7:04 pm


seriously? thanks!

shadowdragon3141
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