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 Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 1:47 pm
I write poetry, and sometimes it's about the Akatsuki or (on one occasion so far) another Naruto person... So I'll share.
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Darkness Falls
1/31/08
My sunshine could light an entire heart
But in the end
He fell apart
Don't say my sunshine was insane.
My nightlight could glow like the fiery sun
But in the end
By life he was shunned
Don't say he was a 'worthless freak.'
My lighthouse could shine across a sea of gloom
But in the end
The Reaper did loom
Just shut up and let him sleep.
My sunshine,
My nightlight,
My lighthouse
Is gone
And with the lights shut off
I can't see what I did wrong.
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Sunshine Boy
5/17/07
The rarest of things,
Only here can he be found:
The sunshine boy of Iwagakure,
Who smiles when others choose to frown.
How strange he is,
Our sunshine boy;
A mouth on each of his hands.
But he learns to make do
With what he has;
He does my heart such good.
He's got long blond hair,
Deeper than the richest gold,
Glowing in the silver moonlight,
Mingling with the summer wind.
He's got blue eyes,
More than endless skies,
Shimmering like diamonds in the morning sun,
Dancing with its golden rays.
Our sunshine boy,
He doesn't know,
What good he does the dying world.
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Sunshine Boy (Revised)
1/17/08
The rarest of things
Now lies in the ground
Only here could he be found:
The sunshine boy of Iwagakure,
Who smiled when others chose to frown.
How strange he was,
Our sunshine boy,
A mouth on each of his hands.
But he learned to make do
With what he had,
He did my heart such good.
He had long blond hair,
Deeper than the richest gold,
It glowed in the silver moonlight,
And mingled with the summer wind.
Now it's tangled,
Limp and matted,
No longer will it catch on nature's breath.
He had blue eyes,
More than endless skies,
They shimmered like diamonds in the morning sun,
Dancing with its golden rays.
Now they're dull,
They don't sparkle anymore
I don't dare meet them,
It would make me cry.
Our sunshine boy,
He didn't know,
What good he did the dying world.
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I'll post more later... This is getting long...
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 11:04 am
Holy cow, thats a lot of words!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:18 pm
Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 4:49 pm
kameo5963 Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
And I'm sure you could be awesome at poetry if you tried. It's totally easy once you get the hang of it.
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Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 5:26 pm
Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
And I'm sure you could be awesome at poetry if you tried. It's totally easy once you get the hang of it. You're welcome! x3
Well..I've tried...but my mind gets all cloudy and I can't think of the right words/what to write about/etc. T__T
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 4:44 pm
kameo5963 Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
And I'm sure you could be awesome at poetry if you tried. It's totally easy once you get the hang of it. You're welcome! x3
Well..I've tried...but my mind gets all cloudy and I can't think of the right words/what to write about/etc. T__T
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:18 am
Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
And I'm sure you could be awesome at poetry if you tried. It's totally easy once you get the hang of it. You're welcome! x3
Well..I've tried...but my mind gets all cloudy and I can't think of the right words/what to write about/etc. T__T
Well, I know what I want to write about, it's just that I add too many words. ._.
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Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 4:12 pm
kameo5963 Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Sea Sprite Nerissa kameo5963 Those are so beautiful! :3 *tears of joy*
I haven't tried to write Akatsuki/Naruto poetry, because I know for sure I'd fail at it. xD
And I'm sure you could be awesome at poetry if you tried. It's totally easy once you get the hang of it. You're welcome! x3
Well..I've tried...but my mind gets all cloudy and I can't think of the right words/what to write about/etc. T__T
Well, I know what I want to write about, it's just that I add too many words. ._.
There is no such thing as "too many words." One of my poems is three pages long!
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