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 Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 6:42 pm
This will be my second battle scream .. if someone accepts sweatdrop . I have not seen that much activity since Iv been here. But I looked at some old threads and I know theres a whole lot of good battlers. I may not be a challenge for some of you "yet", but c'mon just for kicks wink .
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 6:20 pm
why not, try to post tonight.
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:27 pm
8 bars max, no recycle,biting,feeding.
Im gonna try to drop by tonight.
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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:53 pm
My sonic speed to exceed will never exhaust
I make chow out of Chao's that think there creating chaos
your infatuation with children things is clearly evident ( Referring to accessories on his avatar like the penguin shoes and cats)
but molesting midgets and kids don't make you maleficent
it makes you look like a junky making no dividends
or a convict hesitant to touch a women after imprisonment
its sad really but I don't show no sympathy
I burn like syphilis then play like symphonies
and when the fat lady sings I'll lay off the strings
you trying to win is useless like ostriches flapping their wings
it aint hard to tell, you shouldn't be messing with Shel
I make imbeciles repel with my lyrical spells
yea, I bumped your moms humps, then she sucked me with her camel lips
but my d**k was so hard, it made her damn enamel chip xp
Note. A Chao is a little harmless creature from the sonic games. Just for yall who've never played sonic.
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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:04 pm
Samurai Shel My sonic speed to exceed will never exhaust I make chow out of Chao's that think there creating chaos your infatuation with children things is clearly evident ( Referring to accessories on his avatar like the penguin shoes and cats) but molesting midgets and kids don't make you maleficent it makes you look like a junky making no dividends or a convict hesitant to touch a women after imprisonment its sad really but I don't show no sympathy I burn like syphilis then play like symphonies and when the fat lady sings I'll lay off the strings you trying to win is useless like ostriches flapping their wings it aint hard to tell, you shouldn't be messing with Shel I make imbeciles repel with my lyrical spells yea, I bumped your moms humps, then she sucked me with her camel lips but my d**k was so hard, it made her damn enamel chip xp Note. A Chao is a little harmless creature from the sonic games. Just for yall who've never played sonic.
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 4:39 pm
Don_of_GMM_OG Samurai Shel My sonic speed to exceed will never exhaust I make chow out of Chao's that think there creating chaos your infatuation with children things is clearly evident ( Referring to accessories on his avatar like the penguin shoes and cats) but molesting midgets and kids don't make you maleficent it makes you look like a junky making no dividends or a convict hesitant to touch a women after imprisonment its sad really but I don't show no sympathy I burn like syphilis then play like symphonies and when the fat lady sings I'll lay off the strings you trying to win is useless like ostriches flapping their wings it aint hard to tell, you shouldn't be messing with Shel I make imbeciles repel with my lyrical spells yea, I bumped your moms humps, then she sucked me with her camel lips but my d**k was so hard, it made her damn enamel chip xp Note. A Chao is a little harmless creature from the sonic games. Just for yall who've never played sonic. wanna battle me next?
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:43 pm
Samurai Shel Don_of_GMM_OG Samurai Shel My sonic speed to exceed will never exhaust I make chow out of Chao's that think there creating chaos your infatuation with children things is clearly evident ( Referring to accessories on his avatar like the penguin shoes and cats) but molesting midgets and kids don't make you maleficent it makes you look like a junky making no dividends or a convict hesitant to touch a women after imprisonment its sad really but I don't show no sympathy I burn like syphilis then play like symphonies and when the fat lady sings I'll lay off the strings you trying to win is useless like ostriches flapping their wings it aint hard to tell, you shouldn't be messing with Shel I make imbeciles repel with my lyrical spells yea, I bumped your moms humps, then she sucked me with her camel lips but my d**k was so hard, it made her damn enamel chip xp Note. A Chao is a little harmless creature from the sonic games. Just for yall who've never played sonic. wanna battle me next? s**t drop then *****
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:58 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 11:25 pm
you're a shel of what you should be, you would be
if I was as you write I'd just be a lazy a*****e, poopy
sickest s**t you leave is in your boxers from normal ware
not one of those samurai armors behind glass, had no care
whoever wore you s**t in you out of poverty and despair
from having to walk around with a pos like you, and dog
man your dog, I feel bad for him, shave your a** and walk
your a** backwards, atleast give him that dignity to rock
the boat, since you obviously won't, since you can't write a note
go on leave on your coat, won't take long and you can leave
I can't say you're a biter, more like a pirate, butt thief
like osama on south park, boy, you don't need a nutt leaf
A comparison, I am the chick you see on TV on the infomercial
you're the fat b***h with a husky voice on the phone, twist? its a reversal
two different aspects to what there is, good and well I dunno bout you
poor salt in the wounds, cause a snail is a slug with a shell, now guess who.
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 4:22 pm
Well Ill just vote for this one to.
Even though I dont like Chaos I got to respect his skills. Shel it was a good verse but you to me you did not really get at him enough, your last bar was funny. But Chaos verse was more complex and personal.
vote:chaos
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Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:25 pm
DonMac Well Ill just vote for this one to. Even though I dont like Chaos I got to respect his skills. Shel it was a good verse but you to me you did not really get at him enough, your last bar was funny. But Chaos verse was more complex and personal. vote:chaos thanks for voting.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:04 pm
Yes, thanks for the vote. Honestly Chaos you obviously beat me. There is no need to wait for more votes. Thanks for the battle.
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:15 pm
Samurai Shel Yes, thanks for the vote. Honestly Chaos you obviously beat me. There is no need to wait for more votes. Thanks for the battle. no prob, you did a better job in your other battle.
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 10:58 am
@Chaos: I've read many of your compositions over the past years and I would have to say, you're one of the most consistent keystlyers here on Gaia. Props. To be honest, I didn't expect you to throw down a verse like this, and it took me by surprise. But it gave you enough to win and that is all that matters. Your punches were clearly better and the wordplay exceeded your opposition. I look forward to reading some more of your work.
@Shel: This was not your best drop and there are many flaws, starting with one word, F-L-O-W. Your flow is very inconsistent and keeps readers wondering where you are going. But I would have to say, you did have some creative bars.
You its sad really but I don't show no sympathy I burn like syphilis then play like symphonies
Work on your bar constuction and reword some phrases.
OVERALL:
Chaos won this battle, but on the other side, Shel, you can get better. Just reading a verse like this shows that you have a great imagination, and the ability to put together some creative punchs. I give props to Shel for taking on such a veteran like Chaos.
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:59 am
both had strong point's, both had weak point's
i thought chaos's was better, stronger disses, and my over all taste lean'd towards MC
shel, you did pretty good =] good luck in the future
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