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 Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:52 pm
we have to do a poetry project. part of it includes writeing a poem for each type of poetry.
I did a couplet today.
does this sound good?
The room filled with childrens laughter,
but all of that should stop after
a tumble of feet,
turns into something incomplete.
a hardcore SMASH,
along with a quick flash,
a shattered lamp lay on the floor,
they wish they weren't there anymore.
its about my cousins and I breaking a lamp.....
TWICE.
sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:08 pm
lol, I like it. SUTZUKI SMASH!!
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:57 pm
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