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 Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:16 pm
PART I. PHYSICAL Full name:: Ajax AdidasReason for name:: Parents once got ahold of a book that they didn't understand more than knowing that it was a book about a grand epic battle that took place long ago. While flipping through the pages they found the name Ajax and like how it rolled off of their tounges, the last name was because they found the book along with a hat with a very weird three bar shaped triangle looking thing that they most enjoyed until they lost it.Date of Birth/Age:: August 19th, 1984 Address:: 15 Sesame Street - East Housing Race/Ethnic Background/Nationality:: SMI Height:: 5'9 Weight/Body Build:: 184/Toned and muscular Hair:: White with red streaks Eyes:: White in the dark/ Gray in the sun Peculiar Physical Traits:: Eyes, really long and strong tail, and that's about it physically Distinguishing Marks:: Hair and Tribal markings which are a very strong physical trait that has been said to be traced back through the history of the breedHealth:: Well for the most part accept for an occasional coughing fit which he blames on his job Senses:: He can see well in both night and day thanks to his changing eyes but when the sun is rising or setting during the period of gestation he's next to blind, his sense of smell is faint, he can't really feel much to his touch because of the calluses on his hands from his job but he can taste and hear just fine (out of his left ear, his right is a bit hard thanks to his brother as a toddler blowing a horn in his ear) Voice:: Very low and very gruff Mannerisms:: He walks strong, holds his head up high, but doesn't really socialize much with anyone accept for his fiance since his parents and brothers murder. He likes to blend in with his surroundings and keeps quiet while in public for the most part and prefers night time to day. Clothes/shoes/accessories:: His fiance hates him wearing a shirt (accept for when he's working he wears a leather smock then it's sexy ), but he must to fit into the class his craft puts him in, in which case it's usually tight fitting and can be taken off quick and easily, his necklace around his neck was found near his family's dead bodies and he keeps it as a reminder to keep searching, he's found always wearing camo pants of various colors and very thick high boots. Eating habits/mannerisms/tastes:: Ajax loves to eat sweets, it's horrible for him but he loves it anyways. Candy of any kind that he can find goes directly in his mouth, he's also a big fan of very marble slabs of meat and fish but stays away from veggies as much as he can (accept for butter cabbage)
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:17 pm
PART II. GENERAL Occupation/Social Class:: Upper class/ Black Smith Views on Money/Spending Habits:: He doesn't really have any, Byrony takes care of the money, he brings her what he makes and is allowed to buy things he desires after discussing it with her, though he normally keeps a couple moneys in his wallet for candy when and if he can find it. Thanks to his job he has very high credit so they're never scrounging for moneys.Education/Intelligence:: His family never really pushed him to go through any formal schooling, the most he learned was how to read and then he taught himself via various books he came across the nature of the art of war, tracking and various styles of fighting. Mostly he fought with his brother a lot, he was always picking on Ajax, so he learned how to stay away, anticipate attacks, ect. On matters of other things however (save blacksmitting), he sort of has the intelligence of a 8 year old. Marital Status:: Engaged to Byrony Political Party/Views:: If it doesn't directly affect him, he doesn't really care. What happens happens, he's just going to keep his head down and do his job while searching for the Revver he believed killed his family wither on accident or purpose. Having such a low intelligence level, allows him to recognize who is in power while giving him the blissfulness to not really give much mind as he dances the line of extreme skepticism and paranoia.Beliefs/Strength of Beliefs:: Ajax listens to things the Byrony says and believes her word of it as he takes in an idea, he accepts all other peoples ideas when it comes to religion and spiritual worlds as differenciations of opinions and finds that there's come common unity in them and that's the more important message. He's not sure what happens after you die other than the cremation of your physical body. What is his/her usual disposition?:: His voice always makes him sound serious about absolutely everything but in reality when it comes to things at his job he takes things quite loosely and appears laid back. Though when he's in the wilderness or trying to once again put together peices of his family's murder he's very intent, very serious and all in all hard core suspecious of everything around him. A lot can be given away in his eyes. Optimist/Pessimist? :: Pessimist Confident/Self-conscious? :: Very self confident even though he's going no where in his investigationsHow does he/she feel about his/her appearance? :: By doesn't allow him to forget he's good looking, so he accepts it and is sometimes cocky about it Most important possession:: His necklace Talents :: Working with his hands and his tail as a 3rd hand but learned quickly to keep it away from hot things as no glove will stay on it. What is a normal day like for this character?:: Wakes up about mid afternoon, has a nice little romp or bit of fun in some way with his fiance, has breakfast (something sweet if he can help it), goes on a jog to the Geeter generator and does his time then goes to work if either anyone requires his services or if he feels like creating something, snacking almost all day then he'll usually go out about the forest near where his parents were killed everydayand continue looking for clues or a revver revisiting the spot, checking every monkey for the marking on their skull. After that he goes to his fiance, has dinner and some fun till wee hours of the morning. Greatest Fear:: Losing Byrony the way he lost his parents Major Goals::1. Finding out what happened to his family 2. Get married 3. Get new friends
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:18 pm
Part III. RELATIONSHIPS Significant Other/Relationship:: Byrony - Fiance Who does he/she live with?:: By Who does he/she spend the most time with?:: By/ himself Father/Relationship with him/Occupation:: Hanzel Soar/Was very hard on Ajax, always pushing him to do better/ Councilor
Mother/Relationship with her/Occupation :: Soccer Sore / Was always too busy for him, but never too busy for Darin (they had the same coloring so she favored him clearly)/ House Cleaner (maid)
Siblings/Relationships:: Twin brother/ Darinious Clip/ His biggest enemy as well as his best friend growing upBest Friend:: By? Feelings toward animals:: By loves them so he tolerates them, they're not his favorite and he doesn't quite understand them but he doesn't put up a fight about them. How does he/she view their family?:: Misses them a lot How does he/she view their friends?:: Would like some new ones that he can trust How does their family view them?:: N/A How do their friends view them?:: Byrony adores himWho is their hero?:: Hamlet Other/General history:: His parents death he's obsessed with isn't actually murder, it was an accident. What actually happened was Ajax was introuble and had to stay at home while his twin, mother and father went out for a walk through the forest and a molding tree fell on them. There was not a revver involved at all, but Ajax doesn't know that and he needs someone to blame. Not that young and now without his twin brother (had his markings only instead of black he was green and instead of red and white he had gold and pink X with some awkward makings across his face) Ajax had nothing to balance him out and had a very rocky teenhood. Since he was a teen the committee allowed him to become an apprentice to Color Slim, his color blind predecessor, and he used that as his outlet becoming very good at his job. When Color died of old age, Ajax took over the business and met By through it by making her a special cage for several injured Skull Llamas. Now older, he is trying to balance out his paranoia giving him the inability to move on, with the need to do so. In order to take small steps towards this he will be attempting to find new friends and actually trust them, putting his paranoia in some sort of check towards others. Until he does this the marriage to his fiance will be on hold. These new events happening upon the island will hit him quite hard once he can understand what they all mean and push him a little harder to befriend others if nothing else than to terminate them from his suspect list.
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:35 pm
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-His nationality is Skull Monkey Islander... or Skull Monkey if he was born on the mainland and is moving to the island.
-I would like to know why his parents named him Ajax McKnight *keeping in mind that there is no ajax bathroom cleaner on the island XD
-I like Sesame Street. That's clever. Of course they'd have a Sesame Street after reading all those children's books. heart
-You seem to have forgotten to finish your sentance for 'Peculiar Traits'
-I see what the advantages to his eyes are, what are the dissadvantages?
- Since his parents and brother murder? Were murdered?
- If I draw him for the Island then he'll have a shirt on. It would be considered unseemly by the committiee and upper class on the Island for a fellow upperclassman to be seen without proper clothing. And if he's a blacksmith then he's Upper Class. Not many Islanders could do that job.
- Blacksmitting is a very needed job, considering most of the island is steam powered. It would be an upperclass job... Ajax would be upperclass heart
- I like his views on the world. If it doesn't affect him he doesn't care makes for an interesting rp partner
- Murdered Parents.... I'll get back to that.
- Tail.... If he uses it like a third hand then it's Prehensile... and if he uses it while blacksmiting then it's most likely caught on fire more than once... and it's probably not as thick and fluffy as it should be with burn scars on it.
- Relationships/Parents... I need to know their names, and what they were like... especially since he seems to miss them so much. It's all a part of the backstory to who he is and why he does the things that he does. Also you say N/A for siblings but I seem to recall a hearing problem derived from having a brother blast him with a horn. And according to SkullMonkey genetics, he had a twin.. brother sister? the one with the horn or another one? His twin died... when they were five? when it was born? before it was born?
- I'm cool with Hamlet being his hero. That's a nice touch.
Ok... murder. This bothers me. I don't want to say that Murder couldn't happen, but there's not really any resaon that I can tell for his parent's to be killed. Also since the island is rather small, and no one is too terribly intelligent, I don't know how someone could be shifty enough to do it and then hide. I know you said he was thinking it might be a revver... that's cool, but the revvers don't murder random monkeys for any reason. They DO have intelligence because each of them was genetically engeneered... and if they killed an islander without a reason, or even for personal reasons then Nivvan would have them put to death, and no revver wants that no matter how mean. They're not suicidal in their revenges. So what I need from you is that entire storyline, becuase I honestly don't mind seeing it happen.... I just need to know, why, who, when, how... how old was Ajax when it happened? What did the Police monkeys do? Did they even find any susupects and such....
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 12:46 am
Sorry... I'm retarded. Fixed.
Since there's so much, the fixed is in italics...
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:15 pm
You... are... not... retarded... heart ... don't say things like that. wink
- The necklace... did it belong to one of his family members? or is it completely random and just happened to be found nearby?
- I really don't know about 'Secret Keeper' ... that seems like a useless job. Councilor would be better because smi would be getting something for their money. I also don't mind him being record filer at committiee headquarters if information was what you were looking for.
- I like his Mom's job. That's good.
- The 'not murder'... as long as it's not a murder, but rather an accident, you can feel free to get more creative with that and even make it look more suspiscious if you wanted. Accidents happen all the time on the island.
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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:23 pm
It wasn't a murder, it was a complete accident. Which is why I don't really want him involved with the committee, because then the investigation would have been taken to a whole nother level and it wouldn't've been dismissed so easily and then Ajax wouldn't have the frame of mind that he does and/or he'd be forced to continue suspect foul play amongst the committee himself which he got over when he was younger. Ajax believes that the arrowhead rock had something to do with the tree falling, but it really didn't, it was completely random. I enjoy the simplicity of his parent's deaths because it increases the complications in his own mind (suspicious of everyone, conspiratory theories, ect.), where really a lot goes on that isn't let off.
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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:43 am
-The tribal markings are genetic. ...?
-So, you're saying... he's paranoid? That could be interesting, but isn't going to win him many friends... just as long as you're aware.
-sweets ^_^ XD maybe to make him sweeter. I like it.
-So he has no politcal cares, and doesn't have an opinion on society woes, but he's obsessed with avengeing his parent's murder because he thinks a defect political faction killed them... that just seems a little contradicting to me. And either, one is fine, or even if he PRETENDS to not care about politics for the sake of being discreet in his investigations?
-How many years has he been searching for the revvers? Does that affect his confidence any at not having found anything?
-He goes to the place of his parent's murder every day? How many years after?
-'Get new friends' goal... I worry about his paranoia and getting new friends... heart
- heart Getting there.
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 11:09 pm
red = changed.
His 'paranoia' is supposed to conflict with his aspiration of getting new friends. It allows for an area of character development through plot and roleplay.
His low intelligence level allows him to not see the connection between the political body that governs his life and the revvers - He doesn't recognize them as a defect political faction, simply genetically defect rebels. That is until this plot happens and then things will change for him and get a lot more confusing for the poor lad.
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