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Lilhazz

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:36 pm


umm my stufff
Death is like lightnin everyone knows thats its there but noone knows when or where it will strike but when it does it seldom leave without leaving a scar a mark 2 say that ive been here u see it every day in ur friends eyes on the man next door face on the homeless guy on the side walk sumtimes these people see it in u as u walk down the street u can hear it in ur words the way u move yes u can tell u've lost someone dear death has left its mark on u death has left its mark on me
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:38 pm


thorn between 2 worlds
thorn between choices
this way or that smtimes i just snap
at the pressure put on me ith like the weight of the world
and i aint waiting till my neck breaks to decide 2 drop it
i kno choices r a part of life but nowourdays all they cause is sufferin and strife
insted of saying taking sorry and movin along u decide to take his life with the flash of a gun next day ur in front of the judge cryin 4 mommy when ur sentenced to life being someones b***h dummy
insted of going 2 skool u meet that guy that promises u the world and tells u that ur his no.1 girl and when ur preganant with his kid he's nowhere 2 b found
now ur outa skool no education waiting on wellfare or havin to pickfares unless u gave up a new life and had an abortion
mistakes that keep repeating themselves is why we as humans are constantly livin in hell the rich getting richer and the poor getting poorer and like crabs in a bucket we pull down one another insted of rallying 2gether like brothers and sisters to help each other sure it gets hard along the way but after the storm there is always a suunny day just faithful and be careful with the choices u make an u know that u will make to the top someday

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 10:43 am


not bad... im not a big fan of poems but i write them from time to time.
here are some of my poems/songs:

The Unbreakable

Time, in its cruelty, bars us,
Jailing us from feeling.
A craving free wind travels forth,
Brushing its feathery fingers across tear stained faces.
Why, oh why, cant we be… be free from this misery?

The echoing sounds of galloping horses whispers,
Raking the memory from tortured souls.
In living death we plead, beg for release.
Yet on we live, living again, again, again.
Why, why, why… are we free yet?

Shadows jump in the vast sorrow,
Distracting the savior angels.
Summer comes again, shining sun along its side.
Beauty rising from distant horizons, yet we stay concealed.
Why, why oh why do we bare this pain?

Love flows along our connection,
Unfolding our inner lights from their caverns.
And once again we wait in the stream of time,
Searching beyond foreign boundaries for familiar faces.
Why, in the vanity, do we keep on moving?

And somewhere we found peace,
Within the sour melodies playing along the river.
Enticing the mind with notes of harmonious mystery,
We walk along through the rain, the tears of mother nature.
Why… why, is all I ask… why do we endure this?

I walk on forever, determined to find you.
Wishing gets nowhere, so in my hope, I search once again,
Believing through the fields of hell I tread upon.
Tremendous, our efforts, how it will play out, I know not.
Then the question rises again… why, oh why?

I will always be here, waiting for you to come home,
Come home to me.
Our love shall prevail one way or another.
No amount of twilight or endless tears will stop us.
And the answer has risen.

We will find the joy however long it may take.
This demonic agony vanquished upon our rejoining.
Broken keys mended, dark clouds parting above our arms.
Here we come together again, home in each others presence.
Lies shattered by us… us, the unbreakable.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:19 pm


i love poems =3
here's one i wrote a while ago.. it's cutesy.




Good Day


i am feeling so poetic,
but i don't know what to write.
thinking thinking thinking,
but nothing sounds just right.


my head just starts hurting,
my brain is pounding too.
i'll probably take excedrin,
but i'll have to take two.


sleeping would be lovely,
if i could make it to my bed.
rest my head on a pillow,
pull the covers over my head.


i wake up feeling better,
my hair is all a mess.
i sit up in my bed,
and straighten out my dress.


my room is very messy
i'll have to clean again.
i just cleaned it on friday,
but this is now, that was then.


i finally finish cleaning,
don't know what is next.
i hear my cell phone vibrate,
and go to read my text.


i open up my cell phone,
and wonder "what does it say?"
i was from a friend of mine,
saying "i hope you have a good day!"

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:09 am


ahh thats really cute!!! hope everyone has a great day!!!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:36 pm


i love it when you come up with a line of poetry then the rest of the poem just comes naturally and it ends up being really cutesy and it makes people happy =3
it's amazing.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 5:48 pm


hm...
here's a few that I did. Most of them are a 'love' poem you can say. I was bored during classes so I just did these. I have real made ones but I can't seem to upload it on my scanner. So I edited them on some other pictures that would have matched them. anyways here it is.
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Next one:
((editing))
PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:39 pm


lovely little panda
i love it when you come up with a line of poetry then the rest of the poem just comes naturally and it ends up being really cutesy and it makes people happy =3
it's amazing.

i totally agree xp

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:42 pm


Azn Lenne Emma Ai Sadako
hm...
here's a few that I did. Most of them are a 'love' poem you can say. I was bored during classes so I just did these. I have real made ones but I can't seem to upload it on my scanner. So I edited them on some other pictures that would have matched them. anyways here it is.
You are...
...My Love
...My Friend
...Me fellow clan
...My Myth
...My fairy tale creature

...One that'll bring me to normal
...My everlasting heart and soul
...One that'll keep me awake
...One that'll hide and cover my fears
...One who'll keep my hearting beating
...The one who holds my Halo
...The one who starts my day

The shining light I see
The only colored one I see,
the rest are Black and White


You're my only way
that I can
Breath to move


My Sands of Time

(editting)

although simple i like it alot
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:01 pm


LIFE

everytime i see people loving their life
i take a knife,
i cut myself
and try to commit suicide.
or homocide
and sometimes i try to commit pesticide.
i write my will
and say that i wish my wishes to fulfill without me
everyone will jump with glee,
i hate everything
but i have to love something
life is confusing
and so is choosing
i wonder why mac and cheese is so cheesy
people think the answer is easy

this has been the most emo poem i have ever wrote... poetry is cool, and i'm trying to get better at it

kittermeow


hobbsrocks

PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 7:29 am


i gots a poem! its not rly like serious n stuff like ur poems, but its funny!

"An apple a day keeps the doctor away," is what my parents say.
"How 'bout apple pie?" I asked them, but they said, "No Way!"
Of course I ignored them, which i quite often do.
I had a pie a day for 2 weeks, BAM i got the flu.

The doctor came the next day, and gave me medication.
Then the doctor asked me, "What was your flu's creation?"
I gave the honest answer, which is what's expected.
"I tried to keep you away, but my plan was misdirected."

I've certainly learned a lesson about keeping the doctor away.
Don't eat an apple, don't eat a pie, try apple creme brulee!

blaugh
isnt that an awesome poem?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:07 pm


hobbsrocks
i gots a poem! its not rly like serious n stuff like ur poems, but its funny!

"An apple a day keeps the doctor away," is what my parents say.
"How 'bout apple pie?" I asked them, but they said, "No Way!"
Of course I ignored them, which i quite often do.
I had a pie a day for 2 weeks, BAM i got the flu.

The doctor came the next day, and gave me medication.
Then the doctor asked me, "What was your flu's creation?"
I gave the honest answer, which is what's expected.
"I tried to keep you away, but my plan was misdirected."

I've certainly learned a lesson about keeping the doctor away.
Don't eat an apple, don't eat a pie, try apple creme brulee!

blaugh
isnt that an awesome poem?

lmao thats a good one

kittermeow


hobbsrocks

PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 6:22 pm


Angelic_White_Rose95
hobbsrocks
i gots a poem! its not rly like serious n stuff like ur poems, but its funny!

"An apple a day keeps the doctor away," is what my parents say.
"How 'bout apple pie?" I asked them, but they said, "No Way!"
Of course I ignored them, which i quite often do.
I had a pie a day for 2 weeks, BAM i got the flu.

The doctor came the next day, and gave me medication.
Then the doctor asked me, "What was your flu's creation?"
I gave the honest answer, which is what's expected.
"I tried to keep you away, but my plan was misdirected."

I've certainly learned a lesson about keeping the doctor away.
Don't eat an apple, don't eat a pie, try apple creme brulee!

blaugh
isnt that an awesome poem?

lmao thats a good one
she turned me into a newt....


xd yea u know it!!! blaugh


....i got better
PostPosted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:12 am


i don't quite have a poem, but i do have a saying

LIFE

life is like a black, bottomless pit
you fall and fall and then when its time to finally crash...
BAM!

translation: life sucks and you end up dying no matter what

Trash Tier


hobbsrocks

PostPosted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:48 pm


Gothic_Black_Rose95
i don't quite have a poem, but i do have a saying

LIFE

life is like a black, bottomless pit
you fall and fall and then when its time to finally crash...
BAM!

translation: life sucks and you end up dying no matter what
she turned me into a newt....


thats almost exactly wut jacob sed at the beginning of his part in breaking dawn.......he sed "life sucks, then you die.........yea, i should be soo lucky........."


....i got better
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