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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:14 am


Any type of poem is accepted! Please no judging only encouragement in a person's ability ok?
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:57 pm


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This is my poem, because I hate the I'll give her a dozen roses poem ha ha

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:44 am


Ok, this isn't a poem, but a song I wrote. It describes my life and all the bad things that have changed me and who I am.


You do this to me
You say it's alri-i-i-ight

But I'm not blind
I can see the li-i-i-ies

You tell me how muuuch

You love me

It's a lie (x3)

CHORUS
If you really loved me
Would you do this to me?
--destroy my life and take away my time---
Do you really care?
Do you love me?
--I would say no, it's my mind--
--my mind--

I seeeee you-a standin there (echo there)
I seeeee you-a don't care (echo care)

You're walking up and walking down
Havin a great time
Like you don't mind
Oooh you don't mind

CHORUS (x2)

Yaaa do you really care

CHORUS

It's my mind (x3)
Wooaahh

I seeee you-a standin there
You don't care (x2)
NOooooo

CHORUS
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