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Lady Godiva de Great

PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 11:57 pm


THE STORY IN FOUR PARTS







The View of the Public

Shiederland has, for the past several centuries, been the most powerful kingdom in the world. The leaders, by some bizarre twist in nature, have all been just, fair, and strong. It has been the land of prosperity and well-being since its foundation. Other nations have cowered, too fearful of Shiederland's supreme military to attempt war or assassination.

King Jordin and Queen Enétre are beloved and known by their subjects as the Heart of the People, due to their benevolent nature. And when it became public that the Queen was to bear an heir to the throne, the people rejoiced for their King. He was sure to be strong and kind, a leader by any means. But after nine months, there was no announcement on the birth of an heir. The Queen disappeared from the public, and the King nearly vanished completely, appearing only at events where his presence was required. Rumor spread of a miscarriage, and in secret, the public mourned their beloved rulers' loss.

Yet again, there went out an announcement of the Queen's pregnancy, and the people dared to hope. But the odd cycle began again after nine months and no word on an heir. The King withdrew more and more, excusing himself even from church. The people forgave him: surely another miscarriage, and the poor couple needed to mourn in private. Patiently, the mass waited, loving their rulers so; enough not to pry.

The word spread throughout the kingdom of tragedy: the Queen had died of poisoning. Outraged, the people demanded justice. The police went out into the country, found a suspect, convicted him, and let him hang. This soothed the people's anger, yet, now more than ever, they felt for their noble king. He, who had lost two children and now his wife, was alone in his castle, nobody to mourn with.

As was the rule of the kingdom, the King had to take up another wife. He married a young lady, Lady Pylantra, from a neighboring country, thus tying the two nations together. The people were begrudging about his choice, but they trusted his judgement.

Soon after marriage, now-Queen Pylantra, who was not nearly as loved by the people as Queen Enétre, produced an heir successfully for the people. A healthy, beautiful baby boy. The young prince was named Daravon and for many years, this finally put an end to the King's worries.





The View of the Queen

Sitting up weakly in the tall, four-poster bed, the woman observed gravely as the priest said a prayer for her keep-safe. His words were chanted in a barely audible whisper that, in her state, sounded more like gibberish than anything else. Rolling onto her side in discomfort, tears streamed down her porcelain face and onto the immaculate silk-woven sheets. Her fist pounded the bed in her last display of defiance, but then rested feebly on the delicate surface.

"Geranna..." she murmured pleadingly, half-turning her angelic head to face a ghost-pale girl in a maid's uniform, who was watching in fear. The servant was really too young to be attending a woman in such grief, yet she had wanted to be with her. "Geranna, bring me my..."

"M... M'lady Enétre, you know... I... I..." the maid began, but wasn't able to finish. Her mistress's face, once comparable to the sunrise itself, was gaunt and had a thin sheen of sweat on it. Her voluminous red locks were matted against her face, hiding her radiant opal eyes. Her whole body was too weak to even hold itself up. In spite of all that though... she still considered her to be the most beautiful sight in the world. Covering her face with her hands, the young maid named Geranna let out a sob, ashamed in front of her mistress.

Seeing the girl's distress, Enétre's eyes softened as if she were observing her own child. "Sh, sh... It's okay. I know. I know. You have done well, Geranna."

"No, M'lady!" she cried, her hands now numb at her sides. "I failed you! To see you this miserable, I should have... I should have prevented it. I could have. There are so many different things that I... I..."

"Silence, foolish girl," the priest chastised, glaring at the hysterical maid sternly. "There is much work to be done yet, lest this be considered a murderous sin by Him. Open your prayer book, you silly girl, and recite the proper rites. Do you want to sentence our beloved lady and king to the fate of a wretched killer when they have done no wrong?"

Unable to utter a single syllable, the maid shook her head 'no', tears still streaming down her cheeks. Her face was red and puffy, and her core was shaking from the strength of the sobs. But, with great willpower, she managed to pull her prayer book out from her large front pocket, and, turning to the correct passage, she couldn't help but to recite without knowing what she was saying. The only thing in her mind was the window for action. There was only so much time that the child could be saved.

Don't cry, my Queen, she thought, half-delirious with hysteria. I will free him.





The View of the Maid

The night did not creep as it usually did. The sun charged ahead on wings, attacking the inky black sky with a fury and determination that Geranna had not known of before. Indeed, it seemed that everything was against her. And her mistress's happiness relied on the success of this wretched plight. Oh, how was it that they could act to blindly as to sentence the child... She shuddered, hugging the warm bundle closer to her chest. Courage is nothing in the shadow of my devotion to M'Lady, she thought elatedly, as, after an eternity of dancing about in the dark corridors and guarded edens of the palace grounds, she escaped the grounds through the servant's secluded entrace.

Breaking into a run, the hood of her burgundy velvet cloak falling back from the cool air fighting her progress, Geranna crossed the short field into the treeline, not stopping until her very legs threatened to give out. Utterly lost, but indifferent to that fact, she planted herself onto a half-decayed treestump, lowering the bundle into her lap to observe what exactly she had saved. In her arms lay the most precious thing she had ever seen: the resting eyes, delicately closed, beginnings of red wispy hair, freckles dotting chubby cheeks and nose, and then an animated yawn, resulting in one miniature hand grasping her finger for comfort. It was the heir to the throne of Shiederland. And they had intended to kill it.

How could they? A priest condoning and covering-it-up, nonetheless! What was so wrong about this child? It was a female, but that was no reason to mericlessly slaughter a baby. There had been many queen rulers in the past. Her eyes searched the peaceful sleeping form in wonderment. She was, potentially, holding the most powerful person in the world.

The sudden snap of several branches and an aggressive bark caused Geranna to grip the baby, holding it high on her chest protectively. A large wolf, the color of polished armor, came bounding into sight and halted right before her, its hackles raised and teeth bared. Its amber eyes narrowed, teeth snapping violently at Geranna's ankles. She cried and jumped up onto the stump. The wolf, although it didn't advance, started barking in irritation.

"Allegor, leave it," came a husky voice from a couple yards off. A young man, hardly five years Geranna's senior, leapt over a brace of fallen trees. The wolf was backing down now, the growling having completely ceased. It panted, looking benignly at both humans now.

"I must apologize," the man said, looking ashamed. He was wearing the common garb of a hunter, and even sported a good-sized bow with a brace of arrows on his back. "We were on the trail of a rare elk, and when Allegor starts tracking, it takes much to distract him."

"Ah, it is good to here that he is of use to you for your profession, though. I don't suppose that a wolf that didn't track well would be of much use, would it?" Geranna laughed politely at the small talk. Just then, the baby started crying. Her eyes darted down to the small bundle, then back up to the hunter. He noted her suspicious behavior and took a step forward.

"Your child?" he asked.

"No," she replied truthfully. She couldn't help it. His calm, grey eyes felt like the eyes of a confidant. "She's..."

"The King's?" he asked.

Her eyes widened in shock. "How did you... how is it possible for you to have known?!" she exclaimed, her arms tightening around the baby protectively. If this man brought her back, they would kill the heir!

"I didn't," he chuckled morbidly. "But it's better to accuse and then apologize for being wrong, then to ask what's right and never know. I believe, M'Lady, that you have committed treason in the highest degree. Do you know what the penalty for that is?"

A passionate blaze suddenly errupted in her body. Her hands shook with a mixture of fury and love; fury for the injustices of the King's ideas and love for the Queen herself. Her head angled downward to the man from her perch as she proclaimed, "I do not care what they do to me. Behead me, burn me, hang me, it is all inevitable and the same to me. The only purpose my life serves at the moment is to get this child to safety; this safety lies beyond the bounds of the castle and possibly the kingdom. This is because the very King himself ordered this child, his own daughter, to be killed. He planned to cover the murder as a miscarriage, but oh! how M'Lady suffers from the woe of the loss of her child. I had not told her my intention to escape with the child, for she would have tried to stop me out of love for me. But I shall not lay down to die until, and only until, I have this child, child of my Queen, to safety."

The man was silent for a moment. He had watched her eyes the entire time, and either she spoke the truth, or was convinced that this untruth was not a lie. Raising his hand to her to help her down, he said in a firm voice, "You are very brave, M'Lady, to have come this far for your Mistress. I would take you as my own and we could, together, keep this child safe. Would you do me that honor?"

"No, I cannot," she replied bitterly, although, slowly, handed him the warm bundle. "My face is known to the King himself: if I and the baby were to disappear, would he not know whom to hunt? I am afraid that I will endanger the very life I am trying to save."

"Indeed," the man replied solemnly. Looking down into her passionate eyes, he said carefully, "I will have the honor of caring for our Queen's child, if you could also honor me with a single kiss."

Geranna's face reddened, and she spouted indignantly, "You talk of triffle things, like kisses, in this time of great peril. Have you no sense man? Quickly, take the baby. I must depart if I am to get back in time for the sun to rise."

"M'Lady, you have arrested my soul. A single kiss, and I would be satisfied to have known a woman of true heart for the rest of my life. Indulge me, woman. I am a man of few desires, but the feel of your rosey lips on mine is one..."

Before he could go on, Geranna pecked his cheek with as much modesty as she could retain, before handing him the baby and running off. It was best to run, for she didn't know if she could keep going if she paused to bid adieu to the young princess. Declaring herself utterly disgusted by the man's brash behavior, her heart couldn't help but to flutter at the touch of their skin. And, although she didn't want to admit it, there were now two loves in her life: her mistress and the man in the forest.





The View of the Man in the Forest

Dear father above, this child would not stop crying. He had tried everything, from rocking it, to feeding it, to burping it. Nothing seemed to work. The first child he had sworn to protect, Nienne he called her, was now at his knee, and followed him into the woods every now and then. She was curious and loud, a firebrand. Even in her youth, she resembled the dearly departed Queen in every way: the same wavy red locks, feral and mystifying golden eyes, fair, milky skin. Nienne is what he called her because it meant Angel in the old language, as she most surely looked like one. But her antics tested the man's patience. That, and caring now for a second child: a boy, he named Redrick (Warrior). He had yet to grow hair, but his baby-blues were reminiscient of the King.

Redrick wouldn't eat. Nienne had tried to help, and whenever she could, Geranna would escape the castle confines to care for the children. But the baby was adamant in his refusal of food. After all the tragedy she'd been through, Geranna feared that she would lose the Queen's final reminder of the oath the maid took. But just when all hope was lost, Redrick grew an appetite and ate like a normal child. Soon, he was healthy, and Geranna could tend the open wounds that had never truly healed.

The man, although loving of his new charges, wished that Geranna would stay with them. He had seen no other woman half her statute, and he knew that he never would. But Geranna had sworn so many binding oaths of fealty to the King and his new ladyship, Pylantra, it was impossible. Impossible. The very definition of the word burned at him night and day as he longed for nothing more than to sit with the children, cozy in their home, and have Geranna come to visit, but stay for good. She was the only woman that Allegor actually trusted; he'd go up to her to be petted whenever she came, and she'd always spare a moment to stoke his silver head.

One day, though, a troop of soldiers came knocking. They demanded to see the children of the residency. Nienne had, bless her, come out and kicked the leader in the leg. This had prompted the leader to kick her and deem them not worth the effort. The only thing that had prevented the man from the forest from beating the very breath out of the soldier was the new dark thoughts: they were searching for the children. He went to Nienne and held her as she cried, glaring at the men as they left. It was time to leave or risk the saftey of the children. He had made a promise to Geranna, and even if that meant leaving her alone in this sad place, it had to be done. During the night, the man fled with Redrick and Nienne to a country unknown.
 
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 12:36 am


THE TIMELINE OF THE TRUTH


1399 ~ Heinder Gheno Franz Waide III is born, crown prince of Shiederland
1400 ~ Church requires a king to be wifeless no longer than one year
1413 ~ Jordin Franz Waide II is born, prince of Shiederland
1415 ~ Archbishop LaRevi is promoted to royal advisor

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Enétre Mari Serev is born, duchess of Shiederland
1419 ~ King Delicoz I, father of Heinder and Jordin, dies of natural causes

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Heinder is crowned king of Shiederland
1429 ~ King Heinder grows ill with a lung disease

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii King Heinder resigns
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Jordin is crowned king of Shiderland
1430 ~ Heinder passes away

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii King Jordin marries Enétre
1432 ~ Enétre becomes pregnant
1433 ~ LaRevi convinces the King that the child is a bad omen and must be killed

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Geranna, the maid, runs away with the baby
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii The baby is given to a hunter in the woods for protection
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii The King refuses to take action against LaRevi's warnings
1435 ~ Enétre becomes pregnant
1436 ~ LaRevi again convinces the King that this child is evil

iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiGeranna brings this baby to the same hunter to save it
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Queen Enétre hangs herself, which is covered-up
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii LaRevi orders a search for the children while the King is not strong enough to refuse
iiiiiiiiiiiiiii The hunter departs with the children, Nienne and Redrick to the desert land of Ghen Zhi
1437 ~ King Jordin marries Lady Pylantra from Ghen Zhi

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii Queen Pylantra becomes pregnant
1438 ~ Lady Pylantra bears Daravon, crown prince of Shiederland
1440 ~ King Jordin secludes himself

iiiiiiiiiiiiiii LaRevi takes control while King Jordin is in mourning
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1454 ~ Present day

Lady Godiva de Great


Lady Godiva de Great

PostPosted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:15 pm


THE CHARACTERS OF SHIDERLAND



Royal Advisor LaRevi
NPC
Currently leading Shiderland as the king cowers behind the castle walls, LaRevi is arrogant, narrow-minded, and devious. Generally disliked by the public, some blame his crooked teachings and beliefs contributed to the catastrophy of the royal family. He says all his actions are guided by the hand of Him, the Wise One, and that he is the divine soldier that now has the power and seat to exact the will of Him upon the foolish people.


King Jordin Franz Waide II
NPC
The king of Shiderland, Jordin is suffering from severe depression as well as mania. Some of his more loyal advisors keep him out of the public eye. They know that it wouldn't bode well for his popularity if they found him unable to keep from whetting his lips with liquor for more than an hour at a time. Although he has been deeply affected by his beloved wife's and (so he thinks) children's deaths, he still cares about the state of the kingdom. Everyday he tries, and fails, to pull himself together in order to take Shiderland back from LaRevi.


Enétre Mari Serev Waide
Deceased
The late wife of King Jordin, Enétre had a very happy life until her pregnancy. She and the king were deeply in love, and both had hopes for a bright, happy baby. Enétre was always found to be maternal by the people, and they speculated that she'd make a wonderful mother. But after her husband, without explanation, ordered the baby away directly following birth, Enétre was never the same. Her smiles were more for the people than herself. After the loss of the second child, despite her husband's apologies for taking the baby away, it became too much. Enétre hung herself from the highest tower in the castle. It was covered up as an assassination by LaRevi and his advisors.


Queen Pylantra
NPC
An exotic dark woman of the west, this noble woman of Ghen Zhi is very proper and cold on the outside, hating her life in this foreign place. She is happy to serve her homeland and bind them to the most powerful kingdom in the world, yet desires happiness of her own. King Jordin never seemed quite right to her, so he brings her no enjoyable company. The only person in the whole castle who speaks her native tongue is Daravon, and only because she taught him from birth.


Geranna the Maid
Available
At the age of only fourteen, this determined and head-strong girl defied the king himself and stole the newborn sentenced to death. It was the dedication to her Queen that made her do it: to see the beautiful lady so sad ripped at her own heart, and she saw no reason why the child should be murdered. Now, twenty-one years later, Geranna has abandoned all hopes of living with her love as he left for Ghen Zhi in order to keep the children safe.


The Hunter
Available
At the age of nineteen, this rough and untameable man came across a girl carrying a child--the Queen's child--in the woods. Somehow, he ended up with the baby, having sworn to protect it. He, at first, did it only out of his love for the girl. But then the Hunter grew to think of himself as the father of the child, and the girl its mother. When she came to him with a second child, desperate, he took it also, gladly. To keep his beloved children safe, the Hunter was forced to leave the Kingdom. The increased search activity of guards worried him for the girl's safety. But he had made a promise to her and, through her, the Queen: the children must be protected at all costs.


Princess Nienne
Taken
The first child of King Jordin, Nienne was labeled by LaRevi as an evil omen. He declared that she needed to be killed. Nienne remembers none of this, and knows none of who she really is. All she knows is that the Hunter is her father, her mother is working in another kingdom, and Redrick is her dear younger brother. The two often explore the boring desert land together, looking for mischief. Nienne is expected to take up hunting as her profession, due to her proficiency with a bow and unwillingness to submit to the confines of femininity even at such an age as twenty and one.


Prince Redrick
Available
The second child of King Jordin, his story follows much the same as his sister's: labeled a bad omen by LaRevi, he was sentenced to death. Geranna took him to the Hunter to save him. After a pick-up in guard activity he and his sister were taken away to Ghen Zhi for safety. He knows nothing of his noble birth. Yet, Redrick has hubris bred into him. He is very cocky, and is constantly challenging his older sister. Even at ten and eight, Redrick hasn't grown out of fighting with wooden swords. It worries the Hunter, since both he and his sister are very gifted in weaponry.


Crown Prince Daravon
Available
First son of Queen Pylantra, third of King Jordin, Daravon is exactly what the people have longed for: the charismatic, gentle, yet firm leader that they knew would always follow the king. The only negative about him is his darker complexion and watery Zhian accent. Not yet serving as a powerful figure due to his young age of ten and six, Daravon spends his days getting to know the people and enjoying life as far away from the castle as possible. He constantly is escaping his personal guard--much to the horror of his over-protective mother--wildly, on horseback. Often gone for weeks, he always comes home unscathed.


Allegor
Comes with the Hunter
A very intelligent wolf that has been with Hunter since he was a boy. No one, not even his master, quite have a realistic grasp of how intelligent he really is. Thoughts, in the form of sentences and clauses, form in his head as he muses about the decisions of his master. And although a rabbit can make all that impossible intelligence fly out the window, this wolf is generally more sly than a fox.



UNMENTIONED IN STORY thus far



Captain Davide Hondrik, son of Sieguil Hondrik
Available
The troubled captain of the secret guard ((akin to today's secret service)) for LaRevi's order to find the children, Davide has a hard time seeing the morality in the law. He obeys it, no matter what, but often feels guilty and responsible afterwards for his actions. Young to be captain, some of his subordinates grumble about it. Davide listens to their whispering carefully to make sure there is no mutiny. He, afterall, has a family with a beautiful young wife and three kids.


King Zhi Shi
NPC
The strict, traditional king of Ghen Zhi, he rules the land with an iron fist. Although he isn't adored like the leaders of Shiderland, the citizens respect him as a good and just leader. Zhi Shi has been planning on connecting with Shiderland his entire reign and now, with one of his nieces, he has finally succeeded in doing so.


Queen Woo Ghi
NPC
The slutty queen of Ghen Zhi, it is well-known by the people of Ghen Zhi that she has many affairs with her various lovers. However, the king is so embarrassed by it, that he doesn't punish her: were he to do so, he'd admit being faulted for having married such an impure woman. Woo Ghi is the disgrace of Ghen Zhi and the stigma of her husband. Woo Ghi has produced no heirs, and in their old age, it makers Zhi Shi nervous.


Xia
Available
A young peasant girl of Ghen Zhi, Xia brings the Hunter's family their goat's milk every other day. She has an enfatuation with the light-colored golden boy, and watches him with his sister, jealous of her. Everyday, Xia wishes that she weren't with her ten other siblings and instead in the arms of the pale boy.


Bestibuse
Available
A mute beggar, shunned by everyone in the village in Ghen Zhi except by Redrick and Nienne. He, despite being mute, is infinitely wise in the ways of the world. He serves to them as a guide when the Hunter is away. To communicate for him, Bestibuse has an enchanted crow, Wark, that speaks. He says--or rather, the crow says in his stead--that he got the fowl from a gypsy of his homeland. The gypsy warned that he'd be mute if he took the bird, but Bestibuse purchased it anyways. Often, he speaks in parables and anecdotes to teach his young friends lessons.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:58 pm


THE LAND AND ITS LAY




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Shiderland
Capital: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Christiano
Goverment: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Absolute Monarchy
Ruler: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii King Jordin and Queen Pylantra
Heir to the Throne: ii Prince Daravon Dhi Mari Waide
Currency: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii The leaflet and the pence
Architecture: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Old French and German
Industry: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Prosperous balance between agriculture, production, and trade


Ghen Zhi
Capital:
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Tsi Zhi
Government: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Absolute Monarchy
Ruler: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii King Zhi Shi
Heir to the Throne: iii None
Currency: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Weilong
Architecture: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Ancient Egyptian/Greek
Industry: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Based mostly upon agriculture and trade


Dandia
Capital:
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Luthwinia (most populated)
Government: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Anarchy
Ruler: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii None
Heir to the Throne: iii None
Currency: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii All forms accepted
Architecture: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Varied


Montia
Capital:
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dondo
Government: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Democracy
Ruler: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Lady Michél, Lady Geenis, Sir Thrope, and Sir Grenarde
Heir to the Throne: iii none
Currency: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii All forms accepted
Architecture: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Mayan
Industry: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dependent on fishing


Damelark
Capital:
iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Metégo
Government: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Fascism
Ruler: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii President Alle Groti
Heir to the Throne: iii Perinz Groti
Currency: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dameisch
Architecture: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Japanese
Industry: iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Dependent upon logging and agriculture

Lady Godiva de Great


SpunkyOtaku

PostPosted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:03 pm


Jeez, someone's been a busy bee. 0_0
PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:19 pm


THE PROFILES SKELETONS FOR ALL CHARACTERS

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((Age))
62


[color=darkblue][align=center][size=16][b]Title First Middle Last name[/b][/size][/align]

[align=center][b]((Controlled By))[/b]
Gaia Username, thankyouverymuch

[align=center][b]((Age))[/b]
any age at all; variation is key!

[b]((Occupation))[/b]
creativity is appreciated

[b]((Class))[/b]
lower, middle, upper, royalty--you may be royalty that hasn't been mentioned in the character list, by all means

[b]((Description))[/b]
physical

[b]((Personality))[/b]
Likes, dislikes, quirks, defining traits

[b]((Past))[/b]
birth-now

[b]((Present))[/b]
recent conflicting or turning events in character's life

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[i]quote that describes your character[/i][/align][/color]

Lady Godiva de Great


Lady Godiva de Great

PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:03 pm


THE PROFILES FOR ALL THE CHARACTERS




Princess Nienne, Ward of the Hunter


((Age))
21

((Occupation))
Small game hunter

((Class))
Lower class/royalty

((Description))
5’7”
133 lbs.
Nienne has the appearance of an ideal princess: voluminous, sheen-filled locks of hip-length royal scarlet hair, intelligent emerald eyes, fair, unblemished face, and a stong but slender body. Her carriage is that of a noble, contrasting against her lowly status as white to black. Rather tall, especially in comparison to the shorter women of Ghen Zhi, Nienne has trouble finding clothes that fit her in the local flea market and is often forced to make her own. As such, her wardrobe consists of mismatching, brightly-colored skirts and blouses that look more suited for a scarecrow than a young woman. When she is out hunting, however, she usually wears some of her father's clothing.

((Personality))
Restless and sarcastic, Nienne has trouble sitting still in one place. It disturbs her how confined her life is in the outlandish desert town she dwells in. That being the case, she has a lot of pent-up frustration that usually materializes in the form of snide or rude remarks. This gets her in trouble (even thrown in the stockades once) and the Hunter has to intervene many times to save her from extreme trouble. Despite her sarcasm and stubborness, Nienne is very intelligent. She may seem brash and thick on the outside, but ever calculating and devious, Nienne notices many things before others and can problem solve unbelievably well. Trouble is, she is often causing a lot of those problems. Oddly enough, even her flat honesty causes her trouble. Ever stating her observations and summations, Nienne has a habit of insulting people with a comment about them that they find less than complimentary.

((Past))
The first child of King Jordin, Nienne was labeled by the royal advisor, LaRevi, as an evil omen. He declared that she needed to be killed. Nienne remembers none of this, and knows none of who she really is. All she knows is that the Hunter is her father, her mother is working in another kingdom, and Redrick is her dear younger brother. The two often explore the boring desert land together, looking for mischief. They have caused the guards of Kahzia endless grief with their antics.

((Present))
Nienne is expected to take up hunting as her profession, due to her proficiency with a bow and unwillingness to submit to the confines of femininity even at such an age as twenty and one. The Hunter has never pressured her one way or the other, but as she nears adulthood, he worries that she is too masculine to successfully settle down.

//Quote//
Brothers and sisters are as close as hands and feet.





Barlem Henic Belisart


((Age))
19

((Occupation))
Street thief

((Class))
Lower class

((Description))
6’1”
183 lbs.
Barlem is youthful and handsome. His body, seeming to be chiseled from marble, is incredibly muscular and toned. His skin is a light tan from his long days out on the streets. His golden blond hair is waist-length and tied back with a bloodstained ribbon that belonged to his mother. Dark brown are his almond-shaped eyes, so dark they are often mistaken for black. His complexion is flawless, without blemishes or facial hair. His choice of clothing is nothing outrageous and is noticeable old. He is often seen wearing a brown tunic, torn black long coat, black loose-fitting trousers, and heavy brown boots with steel plates upon the toe. He wears simple, black armor. It is of the finest quality known, providing optimal defense and flexibility.

((Personality))
Barlem is outgoing and confident. He is the type of person who can converse with nearly anyone about nearly anything. He is calculating and analytical, often taking the time to think about a situation very carefully. He has been known to possess a high intelligence, especially when it comes to memorization. He is able to recall even the most trivial of facts almost immediately upon question. Comedic is another of his many traits. Barlem loves to laugh and loves to see other laughing, as well. His arsenal of comebacks is said to be quite numerous, clever, and effective. His likes include food, wealth, power, fighting, and weapons. His dislikes consist of poverty, weakness, law, and stupidity.

((Past))
Barlem was born to poverty-stricken parents. His father leaving almost immediately after his birth, Barlem was raised by his mother, as well as other members of the lower class society. Mainly comprised of thieves, Barlem was taught the perfected secrets of stealth, larceny, and dagger wielding, passed down through the generations. He quickly grew accustomed to a life of thievery, climbing the “ranks”, and soon becoming the most skilled of the society.

Tragedy struck the society when Royal Advisor LaRevi ordered the search of the missing children. The first target was the lower class society, as they were seen as vile and malicious. Royal soldiers stormed through the community, destroying homes and slaying anyone who opposed the search. Barlem’s mother was one of the many victims who had their lives taken from them. In his anger, Barlem systematically hunted down the soldiers involved and brutally murdered them. After exacting his vengeance, Barlem left Shiderland, taking a journey across the lands and through the various nations.

((Present))
Barlem recently returned to Shiderland, bearing a greater knowledge of the world and exotic weapons from the neighboring nations. These weapons consist of large daggers and a repeating crossbow.

//Quote//
You’re just a parasite, now close your eyes, and say goodnight.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:24 pm


THE GENERAL RULES OF ANEX DE GREAT


1. Obey Gaia ToS
2. PM all profiles under '123'
3. A line of space between each paragraph of text
4. Only I (or any higher forces, like GMs) may mediate disputes
5. Questions? Comments? PM me and I'll add them to the Q&A section

Lady Godiva de Great


Lady Godiva de Great

PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:47 pm


THE Q&A SESSION WITH A NUT JOB


1. What sort of literacy are we talking here?
No specific, nit-picky parameters will be set on post length; being forced to write a certain length often takes away a sheen from one's writing. I prefer a short but eloquent post to a lengthy, choppy one. Post length also depends on how fired up you are about the RP and what you have to work with. Nevertheless, I suppose boundary lines must be set as a guideline. I'd say that no less than a decent five sentence paragraph is exceptible. Write as much as you so desire. Keep in mind, however, that I'm allowing more intermediate RPers (such as myself, haha) to participate, and don't always expect your efforts to be reciprocated.


2. To what degree must our characters follow the plot?
Enough so that practically all the characters interact. The plot is in place to give the characters either an opposing goal to create conflict (and thus interaction) or a common goal to create comaraderie (and, thus again, interaction). The more your character is bent on achieving whatever it is that the story is geared for, the more witty dialogue we can bounce off one another. Basically, don't go off and be a hermit.


3. Are characters made or must they be chosen from the list entitled Characters?
Excellent question, thanks for asking. The list so creatively entitled "Characters" is merely composed of the people I mentioned in the plot, or who have somehow contributed to the eb and flow of the story. Not all of them are necessary, by any means. I'd say the only roles that are necessary to fill are the three young princes(ses). The rest are if you are really interested in the story already created for that character, you liked that character, thought you could give that character some life, etc. I prefer OCs (personally), and I encourage diversity amongst OCs. Meaning, if you want to be an unattractive hag with a funny accent and a lazy eye, this is a wonderful place to do it. So, both OCs and pre-mades are an option.


4. Are pictures allowed or must it be a written description?
Great question. I would very much appreciate a written description as opposed to a picture. If you absolutely must use a certain picture, I suppose you could put the link to it. But, then again, this is a literate RP. We like typing things out here smile


5. Any further questions or comments, please PM me. I aim to clarify smile
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