Eh I can't offer any specific critique because There's nothing specific to critique. You need to study the human shape more closely and try to replicate it accurately.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:36 pm
Your sketches could probably benefit from more interesting things, this just seems super linear Also I personally don't feel the need to throw down a thread on every little thought
Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:05 am
I cannot seem to see the picture to give critique! D:<
It must have been my screwed up host again. Be nice to my bandwidth damn it. (I only post them pics here, how do I ever run out of bandwidth? cry )
Sorry Bilious. Give critique.
Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:14 pm
Hrmmm while I love the content of the picture and think as a doodle the joke is communicated very well, it comes across as just a doodle and not really easy to critique. She's very slender and I suppose the biggest thing that bugs me is that the hand/wrist doesn't look like it would be connected with the arm. you should probably block it in to give form to the wrist and then fizzle it out with white if that's the effect you want. The pose/angle isn't very dynamic, but the joke is best communicated from a side view. I'd like to see the line of her back showing off more effeminate curves, at least insinuating where the back would curve into the top of the buttocks. I'd also like to see a couple strands of scraggly hair in the front, but that's just an aesthetic thing, I think. X)
I don't really get what you mean by "block" and "fizzle", mostly becuase of the air+sound pollution in this place where I'm sitting, but I understand the shortcomings of this work. Thanks.
On a side note, if I were to choose any other pose, I would probably be still working on it until this very day, because then I would have many details to consider; subtle, but precise, details, and I know I would have done them wrong every time and then tried to fix them. Eventually, I would have called this a work instead of quick sketch, but yeah. You won't believe how much my head itched on that day.
This appears to me to be a sketch, rather that a finished drawing. if you want to present it as finished give more consideration to the manner in which you present it.
I don't really know much about the concept or the artists intent here. If you're presenting this as a doodle or sketch, then maybe thing about staring up a sketch thread. If you want to submit this as a finished piece, get into the habit of actually communicating about your artwork, rather than throwing up vague and trivial comments and then leaving it entirely up to use to decipher it. Most people are just going to lose interest rather quickly. If you're not taking your art seriously, that's fine, but don't expect more from your audience.
If i know more about what you were trying to do, then i'm in a better position to tell you whether or not I think you were successful.
Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:58 am
Bilious
You asked for critique, man XP
HAHAHA. I saw that coming. XP
Yeah man. I just like to chatter a little after I get them crits, sometimes. It helps me not sound like one who askes for critique, has you bothered and just takes them and disappeares unthankfully.
Pagey page, that's alright.
I am actually starting to wonder if the term "quick skatching" means anything else other than "quick sketching".
Why is everybody in this forum so sensitive and picky? Man! Chillax! I contribute.
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