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Death Note/FF7 *re-doing but need critique*

RoseDragonfire

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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:43 am

KEEP IN MIND THIS IS QUITE AN OLDIE FOR ME, LOL! ^^

Ok. I made this for last Halloween. However, I would like to re-do this as a simple crossover. It's L cosplaying as Cloud, Misa as Aerith, and Light(Raito) as Sephiroth. Please tell me what you think and how to improve. ^^

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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:08 am

Well, everyone's hands in the drawing are smaller than they should be and aren't proportional to the rest of the body. All of their hair is sharp (not styled sharp, but drawn sharp) and desperately needs to be more fluid, and natural. There's a need to work on the anatomy since I see a few indiscretions such as L's body, and I haven't surveyed the rest, but you could use some more practice in the mechanical aspect of drawing. Besides that, good job! I really liked how you did the wrinkling/shading for L and Light.

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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:54 am

Well your proportions and shape are a little off, and the poses are a little awkwards as well. There's some other stuff that could use touching up, but these two are the most important, touch up on this stuff and the rest is easy to fix.

Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:06 am

Misa looks kinda twisted sweatdrop My Raito-kun! Ouh, he looks okay but the hair looks weird. But! I love their outfits! heart

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Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:47 pm

proportions(spelling?) and poses was a litlle weird/wrong, but hey! it was a great idea though!

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