Lost adrift caught in the sea feeling like theirs nothing for me but to die alone cold and swift slowly starting to lose my breath trying despertly to stay awake as I feel my body begin to drift into the darkness of the sea I see the light fading from me
How u liked it? sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 7:18 pm
Snow kiss42
cool heres mine
Lost adrift caught in the sea feeling like theirs nothing for me but to die alone cold and swift slowly starting to lose my breath trying despertly to stay awake as I feel my body begin to drift into the darkness of the sea I see the light fading from me
How u liked it? sweatdrop
Is it about someone drowning?
Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 7:24 pm
Five Minute Journey
2:37 AM
Tick tock, Tick tock Silently staring At your noisey clock
your past going by you, Speed of sound Everything you've ever done, So profound Flying past your eyes So many lies
2:38 AM
Now your bleeding Stare at the ceiling Why? Life has simply Passed me by
2:39 AM
Fading away, Darkness consuming me No reason to live, How could this come to be? You open the door As i fall to the floor Bleeding, My wrist is slit Vertical lines of hate Why wait?
2:40 AM
The darkness now engulfs me Whats become of sublety? No respect for a dying man Hate, All across the land
2:41 AM
Now, I am darkness Nothing more Nothing less Fading away so very fast Finally, At last
Leave the past
~2/22/08 By Zheifty
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:00 am
I'd really love to say something, It's what I'd like to do. To get theses feelings off my chest, To make you hear out my request, I want to make you feel what I feel, The anger, The madness, Insanity, There's nothing I can do. I'm not in control....
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