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-=and I write.=-

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Davis Shadenhand
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 7:51 pm



-=and I write.=-

by:davis shadenhand

You sever the silence with a solitary sigh
as I hide the tears that well up inside.
I still can't recall the day that it died.
But My ocean of emotion has long since dried...

Like a badge I wear my pride on the outside
Ready to be snipped off at the convince of either side
It's like my life is a roller coaster That I don't want to ride.
It's with these thoughts in mind that I inflict this divide..

And it's only through hindsight that I see what is right.
And it's only now that I start to regret that night, that fight.
My exterior darkness hides your interior light.
And no matter how far I stray it'll always burn bright.
So with no other options I Being to write...

End.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:09 pm


Dude I love this one the most! ts awesome! so far its my fave and I've read all the sonnets - also pretty good smile

I'm afraid I don't have any constructive comments though.....  

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Davis Shadenhand
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PostPosted: Fri May 23, 2008 3:28 pm


Fogheart
Dude I love this one the most! ts awesome! so far its my fave and I've read all the sonnets - also pretty good smile

I'm afraid I don't have any constructive comments though.....


Thanks, Any comment is better than none. Glad you liked it.
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