Best poets come here!

[catnapgood]

Hey everyone Lets see how many poetic mides are in this little world. I want you to post many and only your poems here! I will then rate them on all of these skills:

Fluency:
Power:
device:
Litreter:

Now get going! By the way whoever wins gets a super surprize. heart
Now I demand that you take out your quils and begain the essay. mrgreen  

[catnapgood]

Here is my sample poem.

A hill, upon the sea, there it scouts.
Under the young maidens feet.
She waits, for a day.
When her fair love returns.
But never time will seem.
For he never returned.
And she waited,
waited,
and waited,
and yet.
She never moves,
not a foot,
not an inch,
she waits so long.
That her bodice turns to stone.
And under the hill, upon the sea,
perched upon it,
lies the young maidens feet.
And in her mail.
lay a letter.
A will.
A goodbye.
But she waited.
and she loved.
and she died.
Upon that hill.