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alinefvang

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:51 pm


hey ^___^ .. mhmm~ here`s a
video i made of myself .. singing to
TVXQ`s HUG .. in english ^___^ .. and
if you have a YouTube account .. PLEASE
leave a comment of critism .. much support
is appreciated !! ^___^ .. and


PLEASE LEAVE A POST !!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UvcYxkJOy8

[EDIT]
m`kay .. i am not the
best .. so, forgive meh if i sound horrible
to you >___< .. but, i just want to get
some tips (critisms) and comments to
help meh improve !! ^___^ .. soo, click away !!

Piano Playings

:: JaeJoong`s Insa

:: Footsteps [intro/beginning/ending]

:: Naruto - Grief and Sorrow // Hokage`s Funeral

:: Balloons (Pungseon)

:: Miduhyo (Trust/I Believe)

:: Grief and Sorrow [revised version]

:: Footsteps [front&&top view]

:: From Meteor Garden - Ni Yao De Ai

:: Learn to play "Fate" or "Oon Myung" [Full House OST]

:: Learn to play "Footsteps" [the intro/beginning/ending]

:: Naruto - Sadness and Sorrow

:: Able to Breathe [a song, composed by me]

Singing

:: Me & My friend singing "HUG"

:: Me, singing to "HUG" ( yes, i`ve already posted it before >___< .. )

:: Holding Back The Tears [english]

:: Just For One Day [acapella cut i did; ft. JaeJoong]

if you have a YouTube account,
please leave a comment/tip (critisim)
and ratings !! much is appreciated !!
and please DO leave comments
and tips here as well !! thank you !!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:13 pm


You were pretty good!
:]
Should I record one of Magic Castle??

Kekaru


alinefvang

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:44 pm


Kekaru
You were pretty good!
:]
Should I record one of Magic Castle??

thanks ^___^ .. but, idono~
that`s up to you ^__^ .. haha~ xDD ..
PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:48 am


Your voice is very beautiful~ ^^
At the begining, I was blasted away by the similarity between your voice and BoA's. xDDDD

I only have a little criticism. : 3

As I said, the begining is WONDERFUL. I love it. > <,,

But as you start to get lower (in multiple parts of the song), you lose your intonation. Just a bit~ But's it's enough to notice.
You might want to practice simple scales to help with that.
Maybe some pronunciation practices as well.

Ahh~ I also think you begin to stress your voice when you don't need to while, at the same time, doing a beautiful job of stressing the appropriate points.
My point is, with the stressing, you sometimes lose the pitch.

Maybe try to perfect the intonation of the song, and then add your special touches. x3

Ah~ Your voice is VERY pretty and I'd LOVE to hear more from you. ^^

S a r a n g`
Crew


[ `RAWR ]

PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:04 pm


The beginning was very good. ^____^
But then it gets a bit pitchy and sounds nasal-y (Like you're holding your breath)
To fix this problem, I suggest you breathe through your nose
PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:21 pm


thank you for your tips ^___^ ..
mhmm~ yess~ like i said .. i am not
"the best" .. but, i will improve
my singing to show my better outcomes ?? ..
i guess .. haha~ idono .. i don`t want to
judge myself >___< .. anyways~ thanks
for reading my topic !! ^___^ ..

alinefvang


CRIE.nannako
Crew

PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:32 pm



Wow, your voice is really cute.
I wish i had a voice like you, mine is so...horribly manly.
Some criticisms (not being mean! i know you want to improve)
Remember to breathe and support with your diaphragm.
You have a lot of potential but its your lack of uhh...dynamics? that bring you down.
Do what sarang said and try scales also i find singing whenever you get the chance is good practice. When your by yourself just belt it out.
One day i shall do a recording but until then i'll see if i can improve my ugly manly voice. XD

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:26 am


I think it's pretty good ^.^
lol you can probably become a singer most likely if you wanted...

bluevampire101


Anime_Fanboy

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:31 am


CRIE.nannako

Wow, your voice is really cute.
I wish i had a voice like you, mine is so...horribly manly.
Some criticisms (not being mean! i know you want to improve)
Remember to breathe and support with your diaphragm.
You have a lot of potential but its your lack of uhh...dynamics? that bring you down.
Do what sarang said and try scales also i find singing whenever you get the chance is good practice. When your by yourself just belt it out.
One day i shall do a recording but until then i'll see if i can improve my ugly manly voice. XD

HEY! HEY! Don't be condenscending towards yourself. Look at Aretha Franklin! She can belt out and make a hot record or the girls from TSZX: the Grace! Besides, singing is supposed to be fun, not to show people up... Hmmmm? I wonder where I heard that from? O_O??
PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:09 pm


You're really good!
And I agree, you do sound a bit nasaly after a little while. But you sound really good!

^____^

-x x kyoxtohru x x-


McFlyenstein1

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:14 pm


that was great
you did a very good job!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:35 am


Its really good. =]

Cookie Piizha


cweam_puff

PostPosted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:01 am


awwwwwww wow...

i'm so inspired to sing now xD

me and crie shall sing together and record it!

well..that's if we're up to it xD

gotta improve first. LOL
PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:09 pm


[ `RAWR ]
The beginning was very good. ^____^
But then it gets a bit pitchy and sounds nasal-y (Like you're holding your breath)
To fix this problem, I suggest you breathe through your nose
This criticism is helpful in someways... Breathing through your nose takes up more time than breathing through your mouth... Breathing through your nose, however, is better because you are expanding the diaphragm more than breathing through your mouth. Try to do some breathing exercises if you can. Breathe in for 10 seconds and let out the air for 20 seconds.

Anime_Fanboy


alinefvang

PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:50 pm


thanks so much for those of you
who left tips & comments !! ^___^ ..
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